Winter Is Around

When the dancing dew on the leave fall on ground,
It seems like shouts are coming out of shroud,
And this reminds me that winter is around.
When the way have mist and nobody is found,
The fragile heart beats high, and feelings seems drowned,
And this reminds me that winter around.
When the leave vanish and rain seems hound,
And the tree stand alone,it's face seems frowned ,
And this reminds me that winter is around,
When the mouth stuck and eyes make the sound,
And acquaintances seems precise with the moon round,
And this reminds me that winter is around.
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Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Excellent! Enjoyed very much. BW ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 4:24 AM
Beautifully written. Congratulations on your Win!
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 1:21 PM
Creative winning work . Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Kaufman Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 12:30 PM
your imagery is quite good. enjoyed this piece.
Yadav Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 7:20 PM
Thanks.
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July 12, 2021 at 11:36 PM
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Yadav Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 9:49 PM
Hello ma'am how are you ? I am not able to think about my next poem . Please help me
Alex Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 11:29 PM
Beautiful Rhyme. Congratulations!
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