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Winter Into Spring

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winter icy, dreary slipping, freezing, biting frost, blizzard, warm, sunshine illuminating, awakening, resurrecting, flying spring w h e n kites fly i n gentle breezes a g a i n s t the wind w h e e f u n
Written: 03/07/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bayles Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 5:47 PM
I enjoyed your poem, Sara. Such good memories.
Kendrick Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 6:06 AM
Thank you, Mike. I appreciate the visit. Sara
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March 9, 2023 at 1:08 PM
Just delightful and full of springtime's life, Sara. Love the way you illustrate the wind with your letter placement. I can feel its movement. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of gentle breezes for your kites!
Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 1:35 PM
Thank you, Sam. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations and blessings. It is very quiet, the sky looks as if a bad storm is gathering, the wind is picking up so I don't know where this is going. Sara
Singh Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 6:23 AM
From winter to spring.It is kite shape.Beautiful and interesting.
Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Thank you, Akham. I appreciate the visit. Sara
George Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:40 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem, with its kite shape. Shape poems are your forte, Sara !
Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 3:41 AM
Valsa, I appreciate the compliment, but it takes a whole lot of work to write a shape poem and then sometimes they don't work out because the site's scale won't work with the poem. Sara
Poet Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Congratulations on your top winning placement dear, Sara. Wish you always the best my friend.
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 12:38 PM
Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Pandit Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 5:19 AM
Much enjoyed your poem and your art, Sara. I see the kite flying--rejoicing onset of spring.
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Spring has sprung but is getting a little set back now in the south. It can't be stopped though. The wind is blowing and pollen is so thick it looks like fog blowing on the wind. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 1:53 AM
ute poem and lovely shape.
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:19 AM
Your visits are delightful. Sara
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 1:34 AM
- Creative and lovely poem, Sara (I sent you an S-mail) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:19 AM
I have answered. Thanks for letting me know. Sara
Deo Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 10:13 PM
Beautiful, with apt pic, Sara K. Thanx for commenting on my poem, Consensus or Conflict. Shalom shalom/ Whole-ness
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:19 AM
You are quite welcome for the comments and I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara
Horsman Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 8:17 PM
You take us out of the dark, into the light, Sara, thank you for the mail. Harry
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:18 AM
Why, thank you, Harry. Praise God I have seen a great Light. Sara
Hawkins Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 6:39 PM
I felt like I was floating in the air at the end of a kite, still holding on to the string free as a bird (ancient bird ) Lovely Sara. Thank you. Happy landings. Take care, Old Duck
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:18 AM
Why, thank you, Shirley. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 4:52 PM
Fun poem!
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 4:09 AM
Thank you, Kim.
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