Winter Half Moon

A slice of half moon is in the sky tonight
It shines upon the snow, as I want to take flight
If I could be above in the open skies so free
To sparkle with the stars, I could then see
Everything below and maybe answers sought
For stories without endings that are brought
To me in such unusual but continual ways
May the moon lead my flight in my life’s phase

Heidi Sands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 12/11/2016 4:05:00 PM
You always write so beautifully!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2016 5:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Mike! :) I appreciate your nice comment a lot.
Date: 12/7/2016 10:03:00 PM
Beautiful piece of work Heidi, can you imagine if you were a bird and looking down on the earth etc. and soaring in front of that beautiful moon and stars, I love the moon so mystic and it makes life worth living, thank you for sharing and take care.......Vera
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/8/2016 7:13:00 AM
Hi Vera. Thank you for your visit and kind comment. I would absolutely love to be a bird soaring like that! Yes, the beauty we are given in this creation makes life worth living :) Take care.
Date: 12/7/2016 9:01:00 AM
This was absolutely beautiful my sweet friend. There's that half moon again. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/7/2016 9:12:00 AM
Hi Chris. Yes, here it is for us to see again. Thank you. :)
Date: 12/7/2016 8:29:00 AM
Hi Heidi, The moon looks lovely. Well done:-) Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/7/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Alexis :)
Date: 12/6/2016 10:02:00 PM
I love poems about the moon! This one included! Great pen, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/7/2016 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Rick! :)
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