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Winter Haiku String

it is coming back the cold cruel touch of winter be ready for it the cold is coming December’s winter solstice start of the season ubiquitous white the snow is found everywhere a wintertime scene after the sun sets darkness brings cold in winter a typical night.

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Date: 1/31/2011 9:00:00 PM
I could easily make out what was being strung on this string of winter magic, Robert. one little hint for you. Charles loves it when we do not capitalize or punctuate these! (if it's for his contest) Thanks for your sweet comment just now. andrea
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Date: 1/31/2011 5:04:00 PM
lovely :)
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Date: 1/30/2011 10:18:00 AM
Brrrr-- could feel the winter chill in this one, Robert-- enjoyed reading this :) ---wish you the best in the contest :D
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Date: 1/30/2011 8:58:00 AM
In my old age I am never ready for winter. It becomes progressively depressing. That's Michigan. Good set. Love, Dave
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Date: 1/30/2011 7:32:00 AM
This is very nice...I love it when it starts getting colder, but of course I live in California :) Thanks Julie
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Date: 1/30/2011 7:12:00 AM
Fine seasonal haiku! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/30/2011 5:52:00 AM
Bravo Sir, Bravo! I really enjoy reading good works. Again, well done!
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Date: 1/30/2011 1:22:00 AM
remarkably written, robert! love your word play and expressions! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/29/2011 11:02:00 PM
Great work Robert. Good luck. Love, Joyce
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