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Winter Haiku

nest of pristine snow — frozen smile welcomes the guests who leave their footprints 12/21/2018 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 1/5/2019 7:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2019 8:06:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/29/2018 3:37:00 PM
A unique, brilliant haiku, Kim. The snow has a personality. So well written. Congratulations on your win. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2018 3:39:00 PM
Thank you, Warren!
Date: 12/24/2018 10:17:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win in the contest. Holiday Happiness, Kim! ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2018 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Date: 12/24/2018 5:15:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2018 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 12/24/2018 1:51:00 PM
absolutely charming imagery Kim, i love those final lines. many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2018 5:59:00 AM
Thank you, Jan! Hugs back at ya, my friend!
Date: 12/24/2018 1:47:00 PM
Ah, lovely, Kim! Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest! Best wishes for a Merry Christmas, Carolyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/24/2018 1:39:00 PM
Loved your footprint winter haiku, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Tania!
Date: 12/23/2018 5:14:00 PM
So nicely painted, Kim. G.L. in the contest. ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2018 7:04:00 PM
Thank you, Getshon!
Date: 12/23/2018 9:52:00 AM
Kim, beauty in a few words, a lovey winter haiku for the contest , best of luck ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2018 12:58:00 PM
Thank you, Constance! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/22/2018 10:11:00 PM
Lovely winter scene, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2018 11:21:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 12/22/2018 10:16:00 AM
Snowy imagery Kim.. Well expressed..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2018 4:54:00 PM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 12/22/2018 9:51:00 AM
a wonderful image here... You definitely leave footprints if you step on the snow... Winter divinely defined.. Merry christmas and a happy new year.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2018 4:55:00 PM
Merry Christmas and happiness in the New Year!
Date: 12/22/2018 8:00:00 AM
Wowww this is said and pictured in clever word play. An awesome exotic poem I'm admiring here. The word choice so poetic as well. Kudos. Merry Xmas Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2018 4:56:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 12/21/2018 8:48:00 PM
Great last line, Kim. I wrote a short piece on something like this in which I noticed small animals foot prints in fresh snow. As always thank you for taking time to read me. Best to you. / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 10:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maurice! Happy Holidays!
Date: 12/21/2018 2:43:00 PM
I have something to be very thankful for and that is we don't have pristine snow. Your haiku is awesome. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 2:48:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 12/21/2018 11:31:00 AM
Lovely image Kim. Good luck. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 12:34:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! Happy Holidays!

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