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Winter Haiku

nest of pristine snow —
frozen smile welcomes the guests
who leave their footprints

12/21/2018
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Line Gauthier

January 5, 2019 at 7:52 PM

Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.

Kim Rodrigues

January 5, 2019 at 8:06 PM

Thank you!

Warren Doll

December 29, 2018 at 3:37 PM

A unique, brilliant haiku, Kim. The snow has a personality. So well written. Congratulations on your win. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Kim Rodrigues

December 29, 2018 at 3:39 PM

Thank you, Warren!

Gershon Wolf

December 24, 2018 at 10:17 PM

Back with congrats on your win in the contest. Holiday Happiness, Kim! ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2018 at 6:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon! :)

Janice Canerdy

December 24, 2018 at 5:15 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2018 at 6:00 AM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Jan Allison

December 24, 2018 at 1:51 PM

absolutely charming imagery Kim, i love those final lines. many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2018 at 5:59 AM

Thank you, Jan! Hugs back at ya, my friend!

Carolyn Devonshire

December 24, 2018 at 1:47 PM

Ah, lovely, Kim! Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest! Best wishes for a Merry Christmas, Carolyn

Kim Rodrigues

December 24, 2018 at 2:56 PM

Thank you, Carolyn! Merry Christmas!

Tania Kitchin

December 24, 2018 at 1:39 PM

Loved your footprint winter haiku, congratulations on your winning placement!

Kim Rodrigues

December 24, 2018 at 2:56 PM

Thank you, Tania!

Gershon Wolf

December 23, 2018 at 5:14 PM

So nicely painted, Kim. G.L. in the contest. ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

December 23, 2018 at 7:04 PM

Thank you, Getshon!

Constance La France

December 23, 2018 at 9:52 AM

Kim, beauty in a few words, a lovey winter haiku for the contest , best of luck ~

Kim Rodrigues

December 23, 2018 at 12:58 PM

Thank you, Constance! Merry Christmas!

Michelle Faulkner

December 22, 2018 at 10:11 PM

Lovely winter scene, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues

December 22, 2018 at 11:21 PM

Thank you, Michelle!

Silent One

December 22, 2018 at 10:16 AM

Snowy imagery Kim.. Well expressed..

Kim Rodrigues

December 22, 2018 at 4:54 PM

Thank you, Silent!

Funom Makama

December 22, 2018 at 9:51 AM

a wonderful image here... You definitely leave footprints if you step on the snow... Winter divinely defined.. Merry christmas and a happy new year.

Kim Rodrigues

December 22, 2018 at 4:55 PM

Merry Christmas and happiness in the New Year!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

December 22, 2018 at 8:00 AM

Wowww this is said and pictured in clever word play. An awesome exotic poem I'm admiring here. The word choice so poetic as well. Kudos. Merry Xmas Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.

Kim Rodrigues

December 22, 2018 at 4:56 PM

Thank you so much!

Maurice Rigoler

December 21, 2018 at 8:48 PM

Great last line, Kim. I wrote a short piece on something like this in which I noticed small animals foot prints in fresh snow. As always thank you for taking time to read me. Best to you. / M

Kim Rodrigues

December 21, 2018 at 10:30 PM

Thank you so much, Maurice! Happy Holidays!