Notes About The Poem

Winter, Christmas, Snow, December, Snowflakes, White

Winter Falls


winter falls over the house
    and an old grandma
sits near the kitchen stove with a child
            telling stories, stories 
not from a book but from memories ...
the child shivers and whispers-   the house is cold

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January 14, 2022


Poetry/Free Verse/winter falls
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1421-547-14
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France


Written for the Standard contest, Bite Size Poems #32
sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 01/20/2022

Submitted to the Standard contest, A Brian Strand Verse Freed
sponsor, Brian Strand, 03/02/2022

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 4:04 AM
Your winner in Brian's contest was creative and expressive. Sad. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
La France Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 3:52 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats ~Constance
Hankins Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 1:08 PM
This brought back memories of my grandma's house in the dead of winter and how we used to vie for spots in front of the single fireplace that heated a large sitting room...first the front side, then the backside...and then give up our place to another person there.
La France Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 3:37 PM
Milt, thank you for sharing your story about your grandma's house, I can recall our home being very cold in Winter except in the kitchen ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Leffanta Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 10:30 AM
even worse, so is the stove! Aloha!
La France Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 3:38 PM
Rico, thanks for your visit and comment ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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