Winter Day

Winter Day by Amy Swanson 12/12/2008 Cloudy winter day sky is gray and motionless silver-white frost blankets all chill runs through my bones grass once green is dry and brown; tree branches are stark and bare northern winds blow cold thick clouds hide sunlight from life nature sleeps, awaiting spring.

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Mc Mc

Date: 12/31/2008 2:52:00 AM

sky is gray and motionless excellent Choka-- enjoyed!! all the best!!

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/14/2008 5:03:00 PM

wow this is amazing amy, you paint such a chilling image here. Beautiful write! Thanks for the kind comments on my poem! I get that a lot, that some of my poems sound like songs. I just need a musician that has no lyrics lol. Thanks always! Blessings, ~Michaela~

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/12/2008 5:50:00 PM

This one makes me shiver a bit!! Well done, Amy! ~ Carrie