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Winter Dance

Winter put on his white coat Whispered softly to the wind Come and dance with me We will whirl and twirl in delight As we dance across this country wide Wind gave a sigh in sweet refrain She took the arm of his coat Together they found a rhythm And danced the night away. 26/01/16

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Date: 3/4/2016 8:07:00 PM
I love this one. Love when you use personification. Gosh, I don't have much time but I really want to see all your poems I have missed!!! Let me try.
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:09:00 PM
Personifications are my favorite form of poetry. You excel in this category, Phyllis.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/14/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thanks Elaine for your comment on my poem. I like personification poems as it gives life to inanimate objects. love phyl
Date: 1/26/2016 1:39:00 PM
- We'll find the rhythm together, dear Phyllis :) - You want to dance with the winter ..... and I dream about spring :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/14/2016 11:09:00 AM
I will dance with winter but like you I am yearning for spring. It has been a lovely winter so no complaints this year. hugs phyl

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