Winter Dance

Winter put on his white coat
Whispered  softly to the wind
Come and dance with me
We will whirl and twirl in delight
As we dance across this country wide
Wind gave a sigh in sweet refrain
She took the arm of his coat
Together they found a rhythm
And danced the night away.

26/01/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 8:07 PM
I love this one. Love when you use personification. Gosh, I don't have much time but I really want to see all your poems I have missed!!! Let me try.
George   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Personifications are my favorite form of poetry. You excel in this category, Phyllis.
Babcock Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Thanks Elaine for your comment on my poem. I like personification poems as it gives life to inanimate objects. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 1:39 PM
- We'll find the rhythm together, dear Phyllis :) - You want to dance with the winter ..... and I dream about spring :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 11:09 AM
I will dance with winter but like you I am yearning for spring. It has been a lovely winter so no complaints this year. hugs phyl
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