Winter- Collaboration With Joanna Daniel

Hi Winter, how we feel your icy touch!
The earth remains under your freezing clutch.
The trees stand huddled in the numbing cold.
And the sun has lost its bright sheen of gold.

From nowhere comes the song of any bird.
On slopes, one cannot sight the grazing herd. 
Piles of snow lie heaped on the barren ground.
Whole of Earth lies in a sea of ice drowned!

Snow swirls down in flurries of soft whispers. 
The winter wind wails, whistles and whimpers. 
All creatures for warmer climes are yearning. 
In our houses, fires are warmly burning. 

Skiing and sledding and building snowmen, 
Winter's time to become children again. 
Thank you for reminding us with hue white, 
Sometimes we too need, from work, a respite. 

March 28.2023

~ Placed Third~

Collaborate with Me Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Joanna Daniel
Rhyme Scheme- aabb and ccdd
Syllable Count 10 syllables per line. (HMS)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Gasun Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Absolutely an amazing collaboration poem by two very talented poetes. A sterling beauty of winter indeed! Warmest Congratulations on your shining win my dearest poet friend Valsa! Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
Turner Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations Valsa on your winning write. A winter beauty!
Y. Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Hi Valsa, You and Jo wrote a fine collaboration. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Fowler Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 7:36 AM
Sweet win Valsa. Perfect combo. Congratulations! :)
Daniel Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 6:21 AM
I love winter so much and this one spoke to me, Valsa, great poem and win, congratulations:) loved working with you:)
Lillico  Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 6:14 AM
Very well expressed! Congratulations!
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 4:07 PM
Hello Valsa, you did this winter poem very well. It is spring here now, Yet winter wants to stay a while longer. blessongs my friend./Darlene\
Volumes Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 5:26 AM
Beautiful Valsa, a lovely poem for Jo to finish. Well done.
McBride  Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 9:24 AM
Great flowing poem, love it , so gracefully put together: )
Turner Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 3:24 AM
So cold! This is VERY descriptive, Valsa. Made me cold reading it. Great to see you back:)
Kendrick Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 3:07 AM
Very descriptive work you have penned in this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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