Winter Coat

Puddles of ice glisten and shine; surrounded by diamond drops of snow, falling from the 
heavens.
Silver coloured clouds,
Dark and light carry them all over.

Crescent moon hangs alone in the starless night,
Fighting bravely to illuminate the scene; with a waning glow.
Small creatures of the night scurry in and out,
Beneath white covered green and red berry bushes;
Hoping the owls out hunting pass them by.

Footprints break up the even freshly laid snow,
Crunch; crunch the sound of every step,
Placed deep and firm as they pass neon lit windows;
Some brighter than others just passed.

Branches hang low now bare of their summer clothes,
Snap some go unable to carry the weight of the winter
Coat they all must wear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/27/2016 2:19:00 PM
hi PATRICK, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT --
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Date: 12/31/2009 3:32:00 PM
~~Patrick~~Now you are winding down your year (2009 ) of sharing your amazing poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. As you begin your New Year (2010 ) I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I wish you good health, all the love your heart can take and peace in your life. Love and blessings to you and yours now and always, Carol
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Date: 12/31/2009 12:25:00 PM
I can picture this lovely winter landscape! Well done! Perhaps a poem to enter into the contest? Good luck! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/31/2009 11:00:00 AM
pretty poem, welcome to poetry soup, I don't think I have seen your work before, happy writing to you and may you always have inspriation overflowing for you and others.
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