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Winter Bear

NA poetry contest Sponsor: Ink Empress 3rd Place. The beauty you see in me is a reflection of you ~ Rumi To me, you were my youth. The remainder of my childhood dreams, the obscure smiles of benign warmth the gentle whispers to a tear so meek the flower bed veiling a breathing corpse. And I had seen cruel strife Trees of shade being cut off Sipping the blues drained of life, I bore the scars of alabaster loss. And I was told miracles exist but people who get them don’t prevail you lifted me so, I insist painted my days, thawed my scalding maze Stringent change left my cries muffled I was just running, regretting the passing days But you changed how I saw the world let me pause, if not stop my ways You made the skies live you gave rain meaning. You made winds breathe you gave me meaning. And I- Loved.

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Date: 7/12/2024 4:03:00 AM
Dear hiba; this is so touching“ you gave me meaning and i loved” how heartfelt is this! I felt the emotions flowing throughout this! So well woven and delivered, congratulations on your placement, thank you for sharing,
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Hiba Junaid
Date: 7/12/2024 4:21:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Ink!!!!!!!

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