Winter Beach

After the rain, 
the speckled glint of shimmering sand
is now muddy brown.
Like a blind, closed tight on the warmth of summer,
the winter beach has shrunken in,
changing the colours of my day into
a darker palette, shades of grey.
The sun shriveled
pale faced and worn
as the cold season begins.

Seagulls a beacon
against a slate November sky
their sound, comfort to a lonely beach.
The steps down to the water, pea green,
slimy weed on stone
bright against an ink-rippled tide.

Seaweed colours bleed into my mind while
textures playfully mingle.
The salt air stings my nostrils
caresses my lungs with wellness.
Sea sounds carry from the shores of Wales
as I crunch the length of the ebbing milk tide.

I look to the horizon and imagine another me
walking a beach somewhere over there,
listening to my thoughts, 
as they channel the sea
Grateful for this beauty, the gift of the nature
I look over my shoulder, my footprints remain
solid, as in a freshly cemented path
their sound, echoes in the shells.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Eiken. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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January 3, 2011 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Eiken. Love, Carol
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January 2, 2011 at 4:00 PM
Congrats Eiken on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a wonderful piece to share with us all today with luv.. u can view on the home pages luv..
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December 29, 2010 at 9:07 PM
Eiken you only have 9 poems on the soup. Unless you have a lot more socked away, as I sorely suspect, there is no way you can know how really awesome this poem is. I'm flabbergasted.
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December 28, 2010 at 10:55 PM
I am close to the New Jersey shore all year long. This offering describes what I see in my area quite vividly. Good job.
Chappell Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 6:47 AM
this is a very strong write here my friend thank you
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