Winter Be Gone

Your hands cold as death
Your bite killing like snake’s venom
Your breath leaving trees bereft
Of  leaves, stripped, lonesome

Birds migrating to warmer land
Grizzly bears for hibernating send
To earth a carpet of snow lend
Chestnuts in the lap of fire spend

Gloved hands holding golden cognac in goblets
Men & women dressed in warm leather jackets
Wines, roasted almonds, soups and turkey breasts
 Enjoy the gift of comfort and  rests

On the other side of this scenario 
People in numbers and not few
That suffer profusely because of you
Their tattered clothes are no shield
Of your ruthless biting teeth

Ill nourished, frail and ailing lots
Not haves but have nots
Your victims, your prey, weak and forlorn
Cry out ‘winter be gone’, ‘winter be gone’  

(Judged Winner on Feb. 2, 2013 in the Winter be Gone Contest of Francine Roberts)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/4/2013 1:41:00 PM
A lot of reality in this one..so true! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/4/2013 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Mohammad! Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/4/2013 8:27:00 AM
Hi and big congratulations Mohammad , yes we want winter gone xx
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:30:00 PM
congratulations on your winning write..
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 2/4/2013 1:05:00 PM
Thanks Mehnaz. You are very kind
Date: 2/3/2013 10:36:00 PM
congrats on your win in my contest ( and my name is not Frankling)
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 2/4/2013 1:04:00 PM
Thanks Francine. I regret the error in your first name caused by my optical illusion. It has since been corrected. Regards
Date: 2/3/2013 10:03:00 PM
Hi Mohammad, Congratulations with your wonderful poem ~ Always~ LINDA
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Date: 1/30/2013 3:19:00 AM
I'm freezing .... it's cold here too, the winter's been long. - A very good poem Mohammad, good luck in the contest! - Hope spring comes soon, I long for warm days. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/30/2013 12:45:00 PM
Thanks for visiting my poem and for your appreciation, Anne. As for the long winter experienced by you, I offer my sympathies. For the same reason I moved to warmer Karachi, Pakistan from Portugal for a few winter months. Recently, I had to travel to Islamabad on the invitation of Pakistan Academy of Letters to attend an International Conference of Writers an Intellectuals. I virtually froze in that city. When on my return to Karachi I was thawing, I caught Flu which has taken over a week to cure. Love
Date: 1/29/2013 7:03:00 PM
So many share in the angst that you feel, Mohammad. Best wishes for Francine's contest. Soup Mail. Always, Annalise
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/31/2013 12:22:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and appreciation, Annalise
Date: 1/29/2013 6:19:00 PM
And my toes suffer too Mohammad; living in Canada is not easy this time of year and this makes me wonder where you are. I think there are may who don't have the necessities to be warm and it is very sad. You think of others so often in your poems! Love, Elizabeth
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 2/1/2013 12:06:00 PM
Thanks for your comments on my poem, Elizabeth. As it started getting too cold in Portugal I shifted to warmer Karachi for a few months. I'll return when it is Spring there and summer in Karachi. My poems reflect my personality. I write what I truly feel. When I see poverty my heart bleeds. I am a lover of mankind.
Date: 1/29/2013 2:47:00 PM
Interesting work..This one should be in the winners' list..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is uplifting.,Sara
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