Winter Avalanche

The mountain rumbles
The snow runs down on wolf paws
Hear the lion roar
White pillow clouds block the sun
Snowflakes tickle my lashes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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February 24, 2017 at 7:03 AM
Hah, the imagery is great! Don't stand in the way though :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 2:53 AM
Oh I do love this piece! xomo
Wolf Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 2:24 AM
You are the tanka master, John! The wolf paw is a plant is it not?
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February 24, 2017 at 2:30 AM
Hey, I'm new to this. Grand master can come later. By thanks for the thought. Make me feel better. By the way, yes, wolf paw is a plant, but that wasn't want I was thinking of.
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