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Winter Avalanche

The mountain rumbles The snow runs down on wolf paws Hear the lion roar White pillow clouds block the sun Snowflakes tickle my lashes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/24/2017 7:03:00 AM
Hah, the imagery is great! Don't stand in the way though :)
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Date: 2/24/2017 2:53:00 AM
Oh I do love this piece! xomo
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Date: 2/24/2017 2:24:00 AM
You are the tanka master, John! The wolf paw is a plant is it not?
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John Herlihy
Date: 2/24/2017 2:30:00 AM
Hey, I'm new to this. Grand master can come later. By thanks for the thought. Make me feel better. By the way, yes, wolf paw is a plant, but that wasn't want I was thinking of.

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