Michael Degenhardt Poet Quatrain

Winter Attacks

Winter enters on the back of a puma
Speeding into the deep valley for a kill
Eyes affixed on its prey for devouring
As victims saw in its eyes, the thrill

The waiting prey is smart but so weak
As unprepared does it seem to always be
But this season, with hope, it’ll escape
By climbing the mountains high to be free

Lest not be overcome with the attack
The snow would surely ravage the prey
Move, prepare, don’t sit so idly by
If you see it coming, get out of the way

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Patricia Leonaitis January 1, 2009 at 11:32 AM I really can feel this poem. I am sure you are speaking on two levels, at least. It is a very enjoyable work, both because of its wording and because of the message. The imagery is very good---the description of the puma is excellent. They are beautiful animals, but also very deadly. Thanks much for sharing this meaningful poem. PL

Kristin Reynolds December 31, 2008 at 10:28 AM HA! Yes, as I sit here being buried under, yet again, many feet of snow! a puma, yes, but aren't they gorgeous? :) Love this, love the puma image! Love, Kristin