Winter Approaches

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winter approaches snowflakes tumble from the sky a sprinkle of white As brisk breezes scatter leaves around, Autumn colors confetti the ground. Winter winds howl through barren branches shaking off any remaining leaves. Mother Nature is in transition; stripping the scenery yet again. The naked trees are in remission till Spring showers; water them with rain; and green canopies supplant the plain.

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Michael Tor

Date: 11/7/2024 1:06:00 PM

Excellent piece Emile, your poetic write takes us through the changes of nature and you have described it perfectly. The coming of winter you have captured not leaving out any detail., and is done with exceptional thought and creativeness. A favorite my friend really enjoyed the wonderful imagery and creative way you wrote this. Thanks for your effort in writing, God bless you...

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/8/2024 6:00:00 AM

Thanks, Michael; I appreciate your comments, you have brought a smile to my day, my friend. Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/7/2024 11:18:00 AM

Hello Emile, It is still autumn here. the sun shining with a cool breeze. I am no hurry for winter. My friend. enjoy your day. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/8/2024 11:12:00 AM

Hello Emile, You are welcome my dear friend. Enjoyu your day. /Darlene/

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/8/2024 5:58:00 AM

Thanks, Darlene; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.