Winter Enters

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WINTER ENTERS

Winter                             Leaves to                           Birds go
            enters.                            wither.                                silent.
             Frosty.                           Cold chilled                        Some birds
             Misty.                             weather.                             migrate.
              Horizon                       Bare Birch.                            Restless 
              Hazy.                            White bark.                         Egrets.
              Fading                          Abloom.                              Birds fluff
              Rainbow.                     snowdrops.                          feathers,   
              Plants stop                 Glistening                             cuddle
               to grow.                      dewdrops.                            together.

            Silver                                Snow balls :                    Sun rays
            snow flakes.                   Throw ! Nice .                     shimmer,
            Fun to                               Skating                             reflect
            pull sledge.                      in ice.                                on snow
            Santa :                             Frost bite:                          in faint
           'Xmas                                Caution !                           glimmer.

            Leather                              Prevent                         Long night.    
             jacket.                               shiver.                          Hug tight.
            Woolen                            Come close:                   Sweet sleep :
             blanket.                           Lovers !                          Love deep !
            Comfort                            Cosy                               Warmer
            perfect.                            cover.                               amour.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/28/2023 3:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your top win in the contest, Anisha :) - Well done :) - hugs

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/29/2023 10:01:00 PM

Thanks. Love.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2023 12:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/29/2023 10:00:00 PM

Thanks. Love.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/27/2023 12:05:00 PM

CONGRATS on your top win with this very creative nature piece, Anisha! Janice

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/29/2023 10:01:00 PM

Thanks. Blessings

Ink Empress

Date: 8/27/2023 8:32:00 AM

Wow i love how creatively youve written this poem. Its very interesting and the flow is stunning. Congratulations on being placed 1st well deserved

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/29/2023 10:00:00 PM

Thanks and Blessings.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/27/2023 6:42:00 AM

Anisha, hearty congratulations on your well-deserved contest win with this lovely poem. Your imagery is unparalleled, painting vivid pictures in the reader's mind and leaving a lasting impression.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/29/2023 9:58:00 PM

Thanks and Regards. Have Good Days.