Samiha Zubair Poet Dodoitsu

Winter

Adrenaline rush of frostbite maps out sail
Fugitive senses converge to disrobe snow blindness so bright
Though fluffy and soft in the air
Hard hitting the ground, beauty in opposites ignite

11/11/2015

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Elaine George January 11, 2016 at 9:54 AM Nature and all its wonders Thank you for sharing. Samiha Zubair January 11, 2016 at 9:58 AM Thanks, only the consequence of one moment marks the sequel to the future.

Skat A November 24, 2015 at 4:54 PM I love Nature and all the spells she bestowed upon this time of year. Samiha, thank you for the RUSH.. :) SKAT Samiha Zubair November 24, 2015 at 5:14 PM Thank you.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 16, 2015 at 9:32 PM Wonderful imagery, Samiha! I can visualize the beauty and feel the harshness of winter...hugs, Rhonda Samiha Zubair November 17, 2015 at 4:18 PM Thanks dear. It's just harsh bang of reality after dream flight

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 16, 2015 at 7:25 PM Samiha this a beautiful poem packed with imagery, however, i think like how I am prior i missed the required syllable count, glad I was notified by some of my friends here in Soup.. =`) keep writing!~Olive Eloisa =`) Samiha Zubair November 17, 2015 at 4:19 PM Yes, i think so too. This might be the dipping point. Thanks anyway

A. Juman November 11, 2015 at 10:30 AM Bravo my friend you done well Samiha Zubair November 12, 2015 at 5:55 AM Thank you