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Winter

Adrenaline rush of frostbite maps out sail
Fugitive senses converge to disrobe snow blindness so bright
Though fluffy and soft in the air
Hard hitting the ground, beauty in opposites ignite

11/11/2015

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Elaine George Date: 1/11/2016 9:54:00 AM Nature and all its wonders Thank you for sharing. Login to Reply Samiha Zubair Date: 1/11/2016 9:58:00 AM Thanks, only the consequence of one moment marks the sequel to the future.

Skat A Date: 11/24/2015 4:54:00 PM I love Nature and all the spells she bestowed upon this time of year. Samiha, thank you for the RUSH.. :) SKAT Login to Reply Samiha Zubair Date: 11/24/2015 5:14:00 PM Thank you.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/16/2015 9:32:00 PM Wonderful imagery, Samiha! I can visualize the beauty and feel the harshness of winter...hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Samiha Zubair Date: 11/17/2015 4:18:00 PM Thanks dear. It's just harsh bang of reality after dream flight

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/16/2015 7:25:00 PM Samiha this a beautiful poem packed with imagery, however, i think like how I am prior i missed the required syllable count, glad I was notified by some of my friends here in Soup.. =`) keep writing!~Olive Eloisa =`) Login to Reply Samiha Zubair Date: 11/17/2015 4:19:00 PM Yes, i think so too. This might be the dipping point. Thanks anyway

A. Juman Date: 11/11/2015 10:30:00 AM Bravo my friend you done well Login to Reply Samiha Zubair Date: 11/12/2015 5:55:00 AM Thank you