Winter

Adrenaline rush of frostbite maps out sail Fugitive senses converge to disrobe snow blindness so bright Though fluffy and soft in the air Hard hitting the ground, beauty in opposites ignite 11/11/2015

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Elaine George

Date: 1/11/2016 9:54:00 AM

Nature and all its wonders Thank you for sharing.

Samiha Zubair
Date: 1/11/2016 9:58:00 AM

Thanks, only the consequence of one moment marks the sequel to the future.

Skat A

Date: 11/24/2015 4:54:00 PM

I love Nature and all the spells she bestowed upon this time of year. Samiha, thank you for the RUSH.. :) SKAT

Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/24/2015 5:14:00 PM

Thank you.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/16/2015 9:32:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Samiha! I can visualize the beauty and feel the harshness of winter...hugs, Rhonda

Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/17/2015 4:18:00 PM

Thanks dear. It's just harsh bang of reality after dream flight

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/16/2015 7:25:00 PM

Samiha this a beautiful poem packed with imagery, however, i think like how I am prior i missed the required syllable count, glad I was notified by some of my friends here in Soup.. =`) keep writing!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/17/2015 4:19:00 PM

Yes, i think so too. This might be the dipping point. Thanks anyway

A. Juman

Date: 11/11/2015 10:30:00 AM

Bravo my friend you done well

Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/12/2015 5:55:00 AM

Thank you