Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

WINTER

I am Winter and almost here,
you must give me a huge cheer.
I will bring you a day that is clear,
but watch out for the ice my dear.
 

My white snow can be so much fun,
sometimes I can bring you a ton.
Now go out and run ~ run,
before I am melted by the big bright sun.
 

I can bring a real cold time,
making for an early bedtime.
My wind will make the bells chime,
giving off a pretty rhyme.
 

Before you know it Winter will be gone,
Spring will bring in a new dawn.
Next year I will bring back a pretty white lawn,
until then just carry on.

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Paula Goldsmith December 19, 2025 at 9:10 AM "2 Place" WINTER (Personification Rhyme)~ Written 12/9/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet........

Joseph May December 19, 2025 at 8:36 AM Congrats on your win Paula, Very nicely penned Paula Goldsmith December 19, 2025 at 9:09 AM You have made my day a happy one. "Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you found my fun "WINTER" write to be, Very nicely penned. I enjoyed writing this for your fun contest. Thanks for having it and for my placement. Stay warm this WINTER as you write away.............

Sotto Poet December 11, 2025 at 3:46 AM This personification poetry is both inspiring and entertaining. Excellent content to read, best for a win Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 1:08 PM You have made my day a happy one. "Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Also thanks for your, best for a win. Glad you found my fun "WINTER" write to be, both inspiring and entertaining. Stay warm this WINTER as you write away.............

Karen Jones December 11, 2025 at 2:54 AM Love your delightful Winter write! It’s lighthearted and fun! Best wishes for the contest! Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 1:07 PM You have made my day a happy one. "Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Also thanks for your, Best wishes for the contest. Glad you found my fun "WINTER" write to be, lighthearted and fun. That was what I was going for. Stay warm this WINTER as you write away.............

Gershon Wolf December 10, 2025 at 8:46 PM You can have the snow and the ice. A death trap for anyone like me whose balance is precarious, what with two bad feet, two bad ankles, two bad knees, two bad hips, a bad back -- and a bad case of ice-phobia. Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 1:04 PM You have made my day a happy one. "Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun "WINTER" write. It was a ton of fun to write. Ice-phobia???Me Also... Sounds like you need a cave to stay in. Guess that is why bears do it each winter. Are they smarter than we are??? Hahaha!!! Stay warm this WINTER as you write away.............

Janice Canerdy December 10, 2025 at 8:25 PM Vivid and expressive use of personification, Paula. Lovely piece! Janice Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 12:59 PM You have made my day a happy one. "Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my fun "WINTER" write to be a, Lovely piece. It was fun to bring to life. Stay warm this WINTER as you write away.............

Valsa George December 10, 2025 at 6:22 PM Beautiful personification of winter which is sweetly rhyming too. A remarkable entry for the contest. All the Best, dear Paula. Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 12:55 PM You have made my day a happy one. "Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Also thanks for your, All the Best. Glad you found my fun "WINTER" write to be a, Beautiful personification. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Stay warm this WINTER as you write away.............

sara Etgen-Baker December 10, 2025 at 5:55 PM how uplifting and fun this personification poem is. You made my day, hugs, Sara Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 12:53 PM You have made my day a happy one. "Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun "WINTER" write. I am so happy I could make your day with my fun write. Stay warm this WINTER as you write away.............

David Crandall December 10, 2025 at 3:48 PM Nice, fun, winter personification poem! Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 12:50 PM You have made my day a happy one. "Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my fun "WINTER" write to be a, Nice, fun, winter personification poem. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Stay warm this WINTER as you write away.............

Jay Narain December 10, 2025 at 10:47 AM Nice wintery landscape description. Enjoy the holiday spirit.

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2025 at 9:05 PM Good personification of it, Paula Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 12:48 PM You have made my day a happy one. "Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my fun "WINTER" write to be a, Good personification. I enjoyed writing this one. Stay warm this WINTER as you write away.............

Sara Kendrick December 9, 2025 at 2:12 PM Yes, winter is predictable and it does bring cold and in some places, there is always some snow. Thank you for sharing winter with us through this work. Sara K Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 12:47 PM You have made my day a happy one. "Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun "WINTER" write. It was a ton of fun to write. Stay warm this WINTER as you write away.............

Paula Goldsmith December 9, 2025 at 11:08 AM WINTER (Personification Rhyme)~ Written 12/9/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet........