Winning Eludes the Black Widow

I joyfully married the love of my life Sweet John died when I was only twenty-four But I guess God wanted to add some more strife When my fiancé drowned; I could take no more Like a black widow I spin a deadly web And those who approach me had better watch out Even friends have died: Chris, Jeanette and Caleb Stay far away; I fear what will come about Loneliness is a sad game I cannot win I live with memories of what might have been And heavy depression is building within Trapped in the past, I ask God, “What was my sin?”
*Entry for Joe Flach’s “I Just Can’t Win” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Macfarlane Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 10:38 AM
Hugs Carolyn....thanks for sharing a part of yourself with us soupers. Congrats!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 9:59 AM
Congrats on your win, Carolyn. Life's heartache cannot be explained. I know your dear husband and friends are waiting to welcome you with open arms someday. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 9:28 PM
VERY good one for this contest, CArolyn. Big congrats on your win. Hope all is well with you as the holiday approaches.
Arowolo Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 5:46 PM
Wonderful piece,Carolyn.Congratulations on your well deserved HM in this contest..
Brown Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 1:07 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "I Just Can't Win" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Harrington Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Congrats on your HM and such a sad story, well said. Love and blessings to you! *smiles* Tanya
Williams Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 1:31 AM
Carolyn congrats on your win, although a sad story..David
Green Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 1:17 AM
Excellent entry- so sad. Congrats on your win
Taylor Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 8:16 PM
Congrats, Carolyn. Excellent. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
Grisetti Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 5:50 PM
Congratulations on your HM.
Johnson Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 5:17 PM
This is so sad Carolyn. I truly think it is time for you to have some good to happen to you. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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July 2, 2012 at 4:55 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest Carolyn ...Samia
Austin Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 2:39 PM
The lady has simply had bad luck. Compelling write. Luck in the contest. Love, daver
Chircop Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 11:15 AM
Ow geeeeee so Chris had died too.. I remember you mentioning Chris.. if im not mistaken.. Very heartwrenching post dear Carolyn which misted my eyes..So very profound..hugs sweet lady.. and no friend would ever stay away from you... cos you're a special friend..and good lady:)
Peranteau Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 6:29 PM
Yikes ! I don't know, to laugh or cry ! Still, a great write dear poet ! Much love, james
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April 23, 2012 at 4:26 PM
Such a pleasure to be reading your today my sweet friend.. luv n hugs Michael
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