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a giant with a spear and a shield and a army a boy with a rock and a sling and a god a person with a voice and a song and a spirit a man with a vote and a will and a power a woman with a love and a passion and a desire a girl with a dream and a hope and inspired a god with a son and a heart and an hour

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Date: 12/24/2010 6:47:00 AM
Good morning John, how are you? Its like a win or lose situation. I love the inspiration here i your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 9/20/2010 5:18:00 PM
I love this John Henry, I saw myself in this poem. do you know who I am? I am a girl, with a dream, and a hope, and inspired ~~ just so deep and meaningful~~ and thanks so much for commenting on my poetry~~
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Date: 9/19/2010 10:43:00 AM
Absolutely awesome write John. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/14/2010 3:35:00 AM
beautiful leading poetry john ! to the last drop ! james
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:46:00 PM
What a beautiful afternoon to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us John iii. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 8:50:00 AM
John I love the concept of your write, aptly titled as well.. Hope you will enjoy your day :) Wilma
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Date: 9/10/2010 8:27:00 AM
Very Good!
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Date: 9/10/2010 8:00:00 AM
Thanks so much for commenting on my poetry~~ I think this poem has many vivid and profound words, I especially like the last one~~ love constance
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