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Winking and Blinking

Once he winked, she blinked 
Soothing stars of love released
All their dreams came true!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
  28 NOVEMBER 2014

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Skat A

December 3, 2015 at 1:18 AM

Sweet and romantic Demetrios, Enjoyed. SKAT

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 3, 2015 at 7:25 AM

Another wonderful surprise, dear SKAT! Thank you for your gracious visit!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

December 11, 2014 at 8:53 AM

soothing "shooting". Love Demetrios XXXX rajat

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 11, 2014 at 10:20 AM

Soothing my friend, Rajat, not shooting, LOL! Thank you!

Liam Mcdaid

December 4, 2014 at 8:18 PM

beautifully painted picture demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 5, 2014 at 1:12 AM

Glad you like the picture my friend, Liam!

Gary Bateman

December 2, 2014 at 9:42 AM

Demetrios, A most enchanting Haiku write here. What a superb ending!! A "7" for sure. Best Wishes, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 3, 2014 at 7:38 AM

Danke my guter freund, Gary, for your appreciation. I am so grateful for your visit and comment!

Andrea Dietrich

November 28, 2014 at 10:32 PM

gosh, I am glad that she saw him wink before she blinked!!! CUTE one.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 29, 2014 at 1:16 AM

Do not worry my dear, Andrea, I know she is a lady! Thank you for your...cute comment!

Tim Smith

November 28, 2014 at 7:15 PM

I love the happy ending..Beautiful haiku my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 29, 2014 at 1:17 AM

Timothy, my good friend, so do I. I wish a happy ending for you too! Thank you for visiting!

Richard Lamoureux

November 28, 2014 at 2:52 PM

it all starts with a look. As I age I am thankful to still see the magic in my wife's lovely eyes.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 29, 2014 at 1:20 AM

Richard, my fellow Canadian, what a treat your visit is! Happy to know that you and your dear wife enjoy your happiness! When the Lord is near, what else could happen than this?

Ilene Bauer

November 28, 2014 at 1:40 PM

ha! you've said so much in so few words. nice one, demetrios...

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 28, 2014 at 2:40 PM

Ilene, my dear friend, love doesn't need words to be expressed as a single kiss says it all! Thank you for your visit and lovely comment!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

November 28, 2014 at 12:30 PM

How Romantic Demetrios! Dreams coming true sound so eternal ! Great one!

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 28, 2014 at 2:42 PM

When we find true love, Dr. Upma, dreams have a great chance to come true! Thank you so much for your kind visit and comment!

David Meade

November 28, 2014 at 10:21 AM

I have been winking and she asked me if I was having trouble with my contact . . . I must be doing something wrong . . . However, I am pouncing the next time I see her blink! Of course, I loved the haiku my dear friend . . . here's to haiku love.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 28, 2014 at 2:45 PM

Well my good friend, David, when God created love there were no contact lenses, why take them off and do it the old fashion way, you will be surprised! Ha-ha! Thank you for your visit and comment!

Brenda Meier-Hans

November 28, 2014 at 9:14 AM

Oh I love this little gem. Soothing stars of love released. This precious Haiku soothes my soul.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 28, 2014 at 9:44 AM

Next thing, dear Brenda, will be your dreams to come true! Thank you for visiting and commenting.

Jack Ellison

November 28, 2014 at 8:27 AM

You are such a romantic at heart, my friend! LOL

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 28, 2014 at 9:42 AM

What life would be like without romance my friend, Jack? Thank you for visiting. It is always a pleasure to see another romantic at heart, as you say!

Eileen Manassian

November 28, 2014 at 3:24 AM

Here's a wink for you... ;)

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 28, 2014 at 5:09 AM

I am afraid to...blink, my dear Eileen! Ha-ha. Thank you for the visit and especially for the ...wink!

Dorian Petersen Potter

November 28, 2014 at 3:16 AM

That's a very sweet and romantic haiku my dear friend Demetrious. Truly enjoyed reading it. A 7 for you! Have a delightful day! lol :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 28, 2014 at 5:10 AM

A romantic soul as yours is certainly attracted to writings as this. Thank you so much, dear Dorian!