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WINKING AND BLINKING

Once he winked, she blinked Soothing stars of love released All their dreams came true! © Demetrios Trifiatis 28 NOVEMBER 2014

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Date: 12/3/2015 1:18:00 AM
Sweet and romantic Demetrios, Enjoyed. SKAT
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Date: 12/3/2015 7:25:00 AM
Another wonderful surprise, dear SKAT! Thank you for your gracious visit!
Date: 12/11/2014 8:53:00 AM
soothing "shooting". Love Demetrios XXXX rajat
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Date: 12/11/2014 10:20:00 AM
Soothing my friend, Rajat, not shooting, LOL! Thank you!
Date: 12/4/2014 8:18:00 PM
beautifully painted picture demetrios
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Date: 12/5/2014 1:12:00 AM
Glad you like the picture my friend, Liam!
Date: 12/2/2014 9:42:00 AM
Demetrios, A most enchanting Haiku write here. What a superb ending!! A "7" for sure. Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 12/3/2014 7:38:00 AM
Danke my guter freund, Gary, for your appreciation. I am so grateful for your visit and comment!
Date: 11/28/2014 10:32:00 PM
gosh, I am glad that she saw him wink before she blinked!!! CUTE one.
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Date: 11/29/2014 1:16:00 AM
Do not worry my dear, Andrea, I know she is a lady! Thank you for your...cute comment!
Date: 11/28/2014 7:15:00 PM
I love the happy ending..Beautiful haiku my friend.
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Date: 11/29/2014 1:17:00 AM
Timothy, my good friend, so do I. I wish a happy ending for you too! Thank you for visiting!
Date: 11/28/2014 2:52:00 PM
it all starts with a look. As I age I am thankful to still see the magic in my wife's lovely eyes.
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Date: 11/29/2014 1:20:00 AM
Richard, my fellow Canadian, what a treat your visit is! Happy to know that you and your dear wife enjoy your happiness! When the Lord is near, what else could happen than this?
Date: 11/28/2014 1:40:00 PM
ha! you've said so much in so few words. nice one, demetrios...
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Date: 11/28/2014 2:40:00 PM
Ilene, my dear friend, love doesn't need words to be expressed as a single kiss says it all! Thank you for your visit and lovely comment!
Date: 11/28/2014 12:30:00 PM
How Romantic Demetrios! Dreams coming true sound so eternal ! Great one!
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Date: 11/28/2014 2:42:00 PM
When we find true love, Dr. Upma, dreams have a great chance to come true! Thank you so much for your kind visit and comment!
Date: 11/28/2014 10:21:00 AM
I have been winking and she asked me if I was having trouble with my contact . . . I must be doing something wrong . . . However, I am pouncing the next time I see her blink! Of course, I loved the haiku my dear friend . . . here's to haiku love.
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Date: 11/28/2014 2:45:00 PM
Well my good friend, David, when God created love there were no contact lenses, why take them off and do it the old fashion way, you will be surprised! Ha-ha! Thank you for your visit and comment!
Date: 11/28/2014 9:14:00 AM
Oh I love this little gem. Soothing stars of love released. This precious Haiku soothes my soul.
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Date: 11/28/2014 9:44:00 AM
Next thing, dear Brenda, will be your dreams to come true! Thank you for visiting and commenting.
Date: 11/28/2014 8:27:00 AM
You are such a romantic at heart, my friend! LOL
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Date: 11/28/2014 9:42:00 AM
What life would be like without romance my friend, Jack? Thank you for visiting. It is always a pleasure to see another romantic at heart, as you say!
Date: 11/28/2014 3:24:00 AM
Here's a wink for you... ;)
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:09:00 AM
I am afraid to...blink, my dear Eileen! Ha-ha. Thank you for the visit and especially for the ...wink!
Date: 11/28/2014 3:16:00 AM
That's a very sweet and romantic haiku my dear friend Demetrious. Truly enjoyed reading it. A 7 for you! Have a delightful day! lol :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:10:00 AM
A romantic soul as yours is certainly attracted to writings as this. Thank you so much, dear Dorian!
Date: 11/28/2014 3:10:00 AM
- A pleasure to read ...... beautiful my friend Demetrios! - I wish you a lovely weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:12:00 AM
A pleasure your visit is dear friend, Anne-Lise! have a wonderful weekend! xox
Date: 11/28/2014 2:26:00 AM
Love the imagery of the stars winking:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:13:00 AM
Did you blink? Ha-ha! Thank you dear, Jan, for your visit! Hugs