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Wings of Love Vicarious

On wings of love vicarious With raging impetus my devotion soars In my dreams night after night Your loving heart I’ve conquered Opulence surrounds you worthy of a queen Gardens of magnolia exult your glamour Jeweled combs adorn your voluptuous raven hair Your silken skin mine to admire and caress On a pedestal you become my temptress Till roars that wicked chasm of the morning ruthlessly merciless Brutal reality making a zany mockery of my worship What callous vicious ensorcellment tears me from my fantasy And what if I choose to proclaim my nights as my reality AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on August 15, 2018 for contest EIGHT WORD CHALLENGE-8 sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON - RANKED 2ND

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/4/2018 8:51:00 PM

Sincere congratulations for your win in John's contest, Line, this is wonderfully poignant and passionate - blessings and continued success, my friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/5/2018 12:18:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gregory, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/4/2018 12:36:00 AM

Congratulations, Line on your win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/5/2018 12:18:00 PM

Thank you so much, Subimal. Most appreciated.

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 9/3/2018 3:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Great write.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/5/2018 12:18:00 PM

Thank you, Sian. Most appreciated.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/3/2018 3:29:00 PM

Wonderful write Line, every time I find you at the top, another worthy winner!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/5/2018 12:19:00 PM

I don't know about EVERY time - but most appreciated sentiment. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, John.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/15/2018 7:51:00 PM

Imagery is delightfully well done, and the contrast between the glory words and the words ruthless and callous make this ever so remarkable. This will be in the winners circle for sure, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/15/2018 7:55:00 PM

Thank you so much for your vote of confidence, Caren. There are so many great poets on the Soup, nothing is ever a guarantee. I'm already happy with your award.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/15/2018 6:55:00 PM

Oh, such words!...beautiful entry Line...very dreamy and enchanting my friend...you pulled the reader in...fantastic...love & a winning light...^WW^

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/15/2018 6:57:00 PM

Thank you so much, WW, for your most appreciated visit and encouraging comment.