Jessica Kuilan Poet Free verse

Wings

What I wouldn’t give to feel free...
Gliding along with the ocean breeze
...God how great would that’d be...

Away from the heavens...
Away from hell...
Why can’t it just be...

Alone with the wind
and without any thoughts...
where is this freedom I seek?

If only my wings would let me fly free
I would finally be able to breath
With the gusts of the wind and the sounds of the sea...

God what a great feeling that would be...
Just with that one moment above the sea...
I could come alive again...perhaps even breathe...

If only my wings would break free
From the stress of living a life away from the sea
...what a life that would be...

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Beata Agustin December 30, 2024 at 3:26 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 17, 2016 at 11:21 PM Jessica, your poem is awesome... I truly enjoyed. LINDA

Skat A January 14, 2016 at 9:45 PM Jessica, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

Jiril Clemons July 3, 2013 at 8:16 PM Beautiful description of free wings. I enjoyed this poem, Jessica. My name is Jiril Clemons, check out some of my poems, you might find one you like.

Ashley D. Ruiz March 29, 2013 at 9:51 PM My favorite so far <3

Timothy Hicks March 9, 2013 at 2:30 PM Not bad at all. I think it's something that we can all relate too. I live far away from the sea, but I know what it's like to be by the coast walking endless miles on the beach... it's quite serene!