Wings

What I wouldn’t give to feel free... Gliding along with the ocean breeze ...God how great would that’d be... Away from the heavens... Away from hell... Why can’t it just be... Alone with the wind and without any thoughts... where is this freedom I seek? If only my wings would let me fly free I would finally be able to breath With the gusts of the wind and the sounds of the sea... God what a great feeling that would be... Just with that one moment above the sea... I could come alive again...perhaps even breathe... If only my wings would break free From the stress of living a life away from the sea ...what a life that would be...

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/30/2024 3:26:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2016 11:21:00 PM

Jessica, your poem is awesome... I truly enjoyed. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2016 9:45:00 PM

Jessica, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

Jiril Clemons

Date: 7/3/2013 8:16:00 PM

Beautiful description of free wings. I enjoyed this poem, Jessica. My name is Jiril Clemons, check out some of my poems, you might find one you like.

Ashley D. Ruiz

Date: 3/29/2013 9:51:00 PM

My favorite so far <3

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/9/2013 2:30:00 PM

Not bad at all. I think it's something that we can all relate too. I live far away from the sea, but I know what it's like to be by the coast walking endless miles on the beach... it's quite serene!