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" You were born with wings, why do you prefer to crawl?"  Rumi

Wings

As born again blossoms bloom,
who am I to wilt upon the dawn of spring,
as I can see morning robins gather
to bless me with the melodies they sing.

Their once melancholic lullaby,
disappears with every drop of rain,
in cloudless, bright blues skies,
they have sang away winter's pain.

I watch them collect fallen twigs,
nimbly, creating their new nests,
rebuilding something that was once broken,
fighting valiantly against nature's tests.

They're aware that predators lurk,
so when sunset sinks at silent twilight,
I wonder where do they seek shelter,
so they don't become prey of the night.

With philosopher eyes the mind ponders
what if birds were born without both wings.
How would they fly to freedom when trapped?
Would we still hear the melodies a robin sings?

When bewildered in the wilderness,
some slither softly, lost in melancholic motions,
submerging slowly in shallow streams,
unable to control their erratic emotions.

We are blessed with spiritual wings,
but some prefer to remain within their cocoon.
Unable to learn from the homecoming of birds,
their authentic-self, struggles to hum in tune.

In the migration of misunderstood minds,
we can become lost among unknown silhouettes,
like dead petals ignored by butterflies,
our inflictions turn us into marionettes. 

Darkness will always consume our horizons,
so as I arrive upon illuminations ledge,
I revel in the belief my spirit will fly
if my foundations crumble at the edge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Babcock Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 6:42 PM
A lovely descriptive write on spring. I love it when the robin's return... a true sign of spring. A uplifting poem my friend. love phyl
White Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 5:02 PM
I had a fat robin with a white bottom that stayed all winter. Beautiful words as always SO
Godwin Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 8:58 PM
Hi, so good to see you after my long absence. Miss me? (please read my "I Love Small Boxed Faces", you'll see why.) You are one of the poets I sometimes thought of while gone. Silent One, I swear that by the 3rd Stanza I felt certain your already admirable writing skills had increased, tightened up and polished during my absence. This poem gave me a poetry adrenaline rush and I so love that high. I hope all has been golden in your world, and that you are well. CayCay
Jones Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 12:45 AM
Love the quote and the uplifting poem is fabulous!
Sheehan Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 1:42 PM
Wonderful piece. Great imagery. Perfect for Springtime. Enjoyed. Keep writing.
Rose  Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 2:51 AM
I revel in the belief my spirit will fly. Dear Silent One, its been a while since I last read one of your poems. I'm sorry I haven't been around. Just wanted you to know I truly believe that when we write poems such as this, we are actually flying. Love
Tor Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 7:24 AM
Silent One your words are always so skillfully chosen my friend. I always love the story line behind your messages and the metaphoric suggestions penned by you. The examples you choose convey intricate thoughts that are so cleverly designed to reach the readers mind. A unique writing style that few have mastered and is consistent with your amazing talent as a writer. Need I say More? Thank you for sharing my friend, always a pleasure to read you...
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 5:31 AM
Many great thoughts! Enjoyed, again!
Kauffman Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 12:12 PM
Belated Congratulations on your POTD, SO! Despair eclipsed by hope that gives you wings! Simply amazing! Your images stand out with vibrancy among your haunting explorations of life amid death and danger through the images of little birds building nests for the future. Hope you have been well. Have missed you and was just delighted to see you posting again. Sending you blessings of joy. Happy Valentine's Day!
Me Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 8:57 PM
Greatness such as this poem makes us consider so much and want to explore limitlessly…
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 4:07 PM
Congrats on POTD!
Arendel Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 6:08 AM
Very sweet. This is written amazingly :)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 2:24 AM
Absolutely fantastic. Great imagery of spring and blooming flowers to signify new beginnings and personal growth.
George Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 10:14 PM
Such an inspirational poem from you after a long while. Of course your poetry is first rate. But each time I read your poems, I used to sink into a melancholic mood. This shines with new hope and resilience. "I watch them (birds) collect fallen twigs, nimbly, creating their new nests, rebuilding something that was once broken, fighting valiantly against nature's tests.". Yes, we have to learn from birds. There is always scope to rebuild from broken threads. Hearty Congratulations, dear Silent One on your POTD honor. Lovely poem. Into my FAVE.
Hind Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 9:36 PM
Really triumphant and beautifully written, like a warrior...
Bartholomew Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 2:46 AM
This is absolutely beautiful...I think sometimes God shows us in our deepest moments of pain that it is just that..an illusion of feeling lost, that we were never really lost, the pain masqueraded it, and He shows us the beauty in healing through others and all the small things in life to give us the hope and courage to face our own heart and press into him and realize that love always overpowers the pain.
Tor Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 10:29 PM
Congratulations Silent One your great Poetry is recognized my friend.
Nicole Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 7:04 PM
' some prefer to remain within their cocoon. ' I think when the time is right, they'll spread their wings and fly. Perhaps, there's a few that need a little encouragement. Your thoughts are beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Mckeithan Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 2:03 PM
Excellent poem Silent One. I need to spread my wings more and let my spirit fly as you have done. Congrats on POTD
Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 1:19 PM
oh and a POTD too. Congrats
Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 1:18 PM
love your anology of the birds without wings to people without spiritual wings. Very cool idea, Silent one, and executed astutely.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 10:48 AM
Gorgeous poetry SO. Congratulations on POTD! Your poem has me longing for spring, when I along with the robins will sing and take wing. Have a lovely day! xomo
Bartley Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 9:42 AM
Incredible Poet. A well-deserved POTD! Thanks for being you and sharing, of course.
George Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 9:38 AM
What a wake-up call and a lovely inspiring piece. "In the migration of misunderstood minds, we can become lost among unknown silhouettes, like dead petals ignored by butterflies, our inflictions turn us into marionettes." Lovey alliterations Silent. Congratulations on your POTD!
Empress Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 8:47 AM
Back to congratulate you on receiving POTD! Well deserved
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