William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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Wingless Angel

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Wingless Angel


I saw a face of an angel
                    'twas without her wings
Tho' she glides, just
                    slightly o'er 
Ne'er her eyes go yon
                    from a book of hymns
A smile that would make
                    a sun, be asunder


A voice that stars mimic
                    through their twinkles
Well after an ocher'd day
                    delves to a charcoaled night
Unwet in a deluge
                    of sprinkles
Constant her quietude,
                    a rare graceful sight


For I saw a face of a
                    wingless angel
Who said grace
                    at our dinner table


2019 May 21
*1st Place*
A Brian Strand rime me
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 August 26

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Christuraj Alex August 26, 2021 at 10:17 PM A very inspiring poem. Congratulations on your win! William Kelii Kekaula August 27, 2021 at 12:41 AM Thanks, Christuraj, you're blessed my friend, Aloha!

Ralph Sergi May 25, 2019 at 12:18 PM It is refreshing now and then to read a unique poet . A millennial Shakespeare!

Susan Ashley May 22, 2019 at 6:53 PM I was inspired by the graceful and tender beauty of your imagery, William. Breathtaking poetry, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan William Kelii Kekaula May 22, 2019 at 7:14 PM I am somewhat taken back to your thoughtful words Susan, Aloha wk

Jennifer Proxenos May 22, 2019 at 2:12 PM My Goodness what an angelic poem you have penned William - so beautiful and love the last 2 lines " whos said grace, at our dinner table - your poems are different and awesome! Hugs, Jennifer. William Kelii Kekaula May 22, 2019 at 7:13 PM Grace is what makes comments like yours possible Jennifer, Aloha wk

Vijay Pandit May 22, 2019 at 6:02 AM What a beautiful poem! I loved the flow and serenity of your write, William. William Kelii Kekaula May 22, 2019 at 7:26 AM My many thanks to you Vijay, Aloha wk