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Winging It

The metal clock then strikes midnight as cloud gathers, hiding the moon. But fractured beams soon bathe with light the pen's last verse that thoughts cacoon. Now words unfurl and wings set flight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/28/2019 8:23:00 PM
Your poem is so beautifully expressed, Brian. Inspiriting imagery. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/28/2019 5:44:00 PM
Well penned, Brian. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/28/2019 5:40:00 PM
wonderfully rhymed poem, Brian. I enjoyed this one . Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/27/2019 2:09:00 PM
Hello Brian Duffield, I like the way you expressed yourself in this poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/26/2019 8:44:00 AM
nice penning Brian, well done, Gordon
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