Winged Wonder

radiant spectrum what is this flying wonder attention captured a chrysalis yesterday now winged creature emerges “my pollen’s sweetest,” petunia attempts to lure throughout the garden blossoms seek her brief visits the butterfly flutters by to her fans, she bows bestows butterfly kisses captivating all beauty flies, accepts applause enjoying admiration
*Written May 19, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 1:31 PM
This is lovely, Carolyn. Congratulations on your win.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 7:08 AM
Carolyn, congratulations on a beautiful, well-deserved win!!! Kind regards.
George   Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 6:51 AM
Sensational Tanka's that totally capture the beauty and magesty of the butterfly. Many congrats on your win, Carolyn bfn Lainie
Lindley Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 6:43 AM
Very artistic write and a fine win, Congrats my friend!!
Merrill Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 2:28 AM
Congrats on the fine win, Carolyn. What's it like to come in first? lol
A. Sharma Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 10:14 PM
Amazing write Carolyn ! wonderfully captured tender images ,,loved this read ,, congrats on top win !
Deschler Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 8:15 PM
A very elegant write of the mysteries and the wonder of the butterfly. Just beautiful, Carolyn! Congratulations on your first place win!
May Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 7:49 PM
Congrats on a great win Carolyn
Hamilton Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 6:07 AM
so dreamily beautiful Carolyn an excellent pen hugs
Babcock Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Not one butterfly out here yet. I have my flowers planted so just waiting for this winged creature. Lovely poem with the feel of spring. love phyl
United Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 11:03 PM
I felt the butterflies fluttering across my heart reading this , Beautiful.
Gregory Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 7:34 PM
a very nice piece with a poetic vibes on life cycle...
Smith Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 6:48 PM
A beautiful picture you painted of the butterfly in your garden...hugs Tim
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