Winged Cupid

He saw me but was too late.
Arrow could have meant my fate.
She taunted and made me wait.
We were Cupid's date.


For Dr.Ram Mehta's "Winged Cupid" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Reyna Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 9:46 PM
congratulation on your win..it's so cute and lovely. (^ ^)
Poet Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 6:31 AM
Congrats jimmy on your win in the contest--kashinath
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations to you Jimmy for your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Winged Cupid". Love, Carol
George   Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 10:44 AM
Good one! Jimmy. Many congrat's on your win, Elaine
Muzzey Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:27 AM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your win. Caryl
Neels Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 6:41 AM
Hey Jimmy, congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest ;)
Mannan Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 10:11 PM
Many many congrats on this wonderful win.
Wilson Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 9:26 PM
congrats on your win for this delight! love,Deb
Freeman Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 9:20 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your sweet success in the Cupid contest, delightful words..enjoy, Agape, Moses
Mac Donald Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 7:55 PM
Congratulations Jimmy! Fun rhyme scheme pulling all these lines together. Enjoyed this! Best to you...Mikki
Sweetheart Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:27 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your wonderful success in the Cupid contest luv.. delightful words ..enjoy your win..
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:24 PM
Congratulations, Jimmy!
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Congrats on your success in the contest, Jimmy! Love, "Sis"
Falotico Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:08 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your success in the contest...
Mehta Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 2:48 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in my contest, Jimmy
Song Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 5:38 AM
Cupid's arrow was right on target! Clever, well done. Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 1:40 AM
Cute one. I wish you well in the contest, Jimmy.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 5:00 PM
Cute and clever Jimmy.. good luck in the contest with this fine rhyming Dodoitsui luv..
Devonshire Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 10:35 AM
Such a cute dodoitsu, Jimmy. Wishing you success in Dr. Ram's wonderful contest! Love, "Sis"
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