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Wing Walker Smooth Talker For Tom Cunningham

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His instructor said he must wear tights Most essential in these sorts of flights Fred said take them away Folks would think I was gay The truth is that Fred’s scared of heights Fred fibbed that he’d been a wing walker A falsehood, this sure was a corker His relations soon found He did not leave the ground It’s a good job he’s a fast talker! Inspired by The Wing Walker by Tom Cunningham https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_wing_walker_990038 2/06/18

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Jack Horne

Date: 2/18/2018 1:18:00 PM

LOL, I always look forward to those great limericks of yours

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2018 4:39:00 PM

Thanks so much Jack glad I can make folks smile that:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/11/2018 11:26:00 AM

What got into some of this people's brains to do dumb stunts ,, enjoyed reading

Jan Allison
Date: 2/11/2018 11:50:00 AM

Just a fun write inspired by Tom's poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 2/8/2018 7:21:00 AM

You are just so great at these! I love your story :))

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2018 5:01:00 PM

Thanks Sneha i just love this fun form:-) I wish i had half the talent you do at such a tender age my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 2/8/2018 12:23:00 AM

He was grounded...Nice limerick Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2018 5:00:00 PM

ha ha ha Jospeh I wish I'd thought of that!:-) Hug Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/6/2018 2:32:00 PM

- With life like effort ... many crazy experiments ... with or without tights, Jan :))) - Fun :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/6/2018 2:34:00 PM

lol Anne-Lise I've got to say in the cold snap we are having at the moment my thick black tights are a godsend!:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/6/2018 1:25:00 PM

Lol! Jan, You certainly put a big smile on my face with this one. The photo and your poem complimented each other well. You are the limerick Queen hands down;-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 2/6/2018 1:30:00 PM

Some would disagree with you about me being the limerick Queen but i do adore the form Alexis and if i can make someone smile that is the main thing:-) hugs Jan xx:-) hugs jan xx

Mick Talbot

Date: 2/6/2018 1:24:00 PM

contagious your flighty words of mirth.... best place for feet is here on planet earth.... having said that I must confess.... a hot air balloon flight, the best.... me on Flickr, left link no need to search.... hugs Mick https://www.flickr.com/photos/micks-wildlife-macros/4982615759/in/album-72157624745700541/ There are 95? photos the link will take you to an in-flight image, taken by running the camera out on a line. Enjoy...

Jan Allison
Date: 2/6/2018 1:28:00 PM

Your comment made me smile Mick, our friends organised a balloon flight for after their wedding, the weather was too bad and it couldn't fly it was such a shame:-( will look out your pics now:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/6/2018 12:32:00 PM

Haha , brilliant limerick Jan,I've known a few Fred's in my time but they usually trip themselves up. I've looped the loop but wing walking maybe not lol. Regards Tom.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/6/2018 12:36:00 PM

Thanks so much for the inspiration Tom! I had the stanzas the other way round but it reads much better now:-) No way would you get me wing walking I'm just grateful to take off and land safely!:-) hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/6/2018 12:26:00 PM

You know how to create a smile with your magic words and you do it well. You have fun with this piece from start to finish and it brings a poetic smile to my day my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/6/2018 12:34:00 PM

I can thank Tom for the inspiration - without his poem this would never have been written:-) Hugs jan xx