Robert A. Dufresne Poet Limerick

Wine Tasting Comitia

Your homemade wine tastes pleasantly neat,
An aromatic, crisp, nutty treat,
But we agree among us,
It tastes a bit like fungus,
Tell us. Why do you have purple feet?

Why? Does my wine leave fuzz on your tongue?
Make it part of it's praises you've sung.
Oh please Comitia, hush!.
stop yelling for your tooth brush,
A little fungus will keep you young.



Inspired and written 6/21/11 by Francine Roberts'
 "Bottle of Wine (fruit of the vine)" contest.

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Carolyn Devonshire June 28, 2011 at 3:22 AM :) Very funny take on the contest, Rob. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown June 27, 2011 at 11:49 AM Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Bottle Of Wine" contest Robert. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr. June 26, 2011 at 4:14 PM Congrats on the win. Another fun write. I'll stick to my Yuengling. Vince

Jack Horne June 26, 2011 at 9:59 AM LOL, Many congrats, Robert : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 26, 2011 at 7:22 AM Congrats Robert on your HM in the wine contest with this awesome write my friend.. unique delight.. enjoy honor luv..

Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2011 at 10:33 PM oooh, disgusting!! But they do stomp those grapes with their feet I have seen!! Congrats on your win, robert.

Sara Kendrick June 25, 2011 at 5:07 PM Congrats..Sara

Francine Roberts June 25, 2011 at 4:25 PM congrats Robert on your HM in the contest with this witty entry

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer June 25, 2011 at 8:04 AM Congrats. on your win :)

Nette Onclaud June 21, 2011 at 1:46 PM robert! for goofing around, you had me in stitches, hahaha... a real good one.. no more wine for me! winning;s best! :) hugggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta June 21, 2011 at 1:43 PM Lovely take on the theme of the contest, Robert

Robert A. Dufresne June 21, 2011 at 8:27 AM heehee all in good time Francine ... havin a glass of my wine .. pptt pptt!

Mike Dailey June 21, 2011 at 8:22 AM This should do well in the contest if you enter it. Mike

Francine Roberts June 21, 2011 at 8:10 AM this is not showing up on my contest page as of yet , please check that its entered

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 21, 2011 at 7:57 AM haha..great one Robert filled with fantastic humor .. good luck in the contest..definitely will make Francine giggle..luv.. now where is this wine leaving fuzz on tongue ?? oh.. not in Italy pray tell..hahahahahaha...