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Wine of a Different Kind

Drink a wine of different kind
a wonder drink healthy refined
no need of old wine
new is rather fine
drink the wine of your lover's mind. 


© kashinath karmakar (20th June 2011)
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Date:20th June ,2011

Contest:Bottle of Wine,(Fruit of the vine,when..)

Sponsor:Francine Roberts

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Anula Aboobacker Date: 7/9/2011 10:35:00 PM savoring the wine hidden within, I'm drunk on your lines Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 6/26/2011 4:42:00 PM What a neat verse. "wine of your lover's mind" I need to think on that awhile! :) Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/23/2011 5:22:00 PM DRINK a WINE of DIFfer ent KIND..see hon..no wrong..must start with unstressed to be in limerick meter now watch.. to DRINK a WINE of DIF fer ent ....this word is getting you off meter because it's 3 syllables and because the second 2 are unstressed...hmmm.. to DRINK a WINE of SWEETest KIND, correct meter see? hear?, line 2 the word healthy is throwing you off meter, a WONder DRINK for HEALTH reFINED...try to fix & soup mail me HUGS Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 6/23/2011 4:06:00 PM Oooh. nice ending. Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 6/21/2011 1:48:00 PM very creative, enjoyed this one. thank you for commenting on Rain Drop. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 6/21/2011 1:10:00 PM Clever write, Kash Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/21/2011 1:04:00 PM kashi... waiting for your next piece! missing your style..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/21/2011 12:51:00 PM Super limerick, Kash, and the last line is amazing! Best wishes in Francine's contest with this great entry. Love and blessings, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/21/2011 5:12:00 AM wow ..well I sure luv that last line Kash.. potent and powerful .. always enjoy your concepts in poetry luv.. good luck in the contest.. great job on the contest theme..luv.. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/21/2011 3:18:00 AM Reads like a winner to me...Very creative work..Good luck..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/20/2011 11:57:00 PM just how original can this get, dear kashi... i likey lots; sentimental! best of luck!.. come visit..:) huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/20/2011 11:00:00 PM Aww, that is a sweet little poem, the "wine of your lover's mind" Very original, my friend! Login to Reply

Delysia Hendricks Date: 6/20/2011 7:25:00 PM Profound and eloquently put. Drink up all you may and stay intoxicated. Good luck in Francine's contest with this smooth write. :-) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/20/2011 3:41:00 PM Lovely and unique way to approach the theme, kashinath Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 6/20/2011 1:37:00 PM Do you drink it? Login to Reply