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Wine of a Different Kind

Drink a wine of different kind a wonder drink healthy refined no need of old wine new is rather fine drink the wine of your lover's mind. © kashinath karmakar (20th June 2011) ===============00================ Date:20th June ,2011 Contest:Bottle of Wine,(Fruit of the vine,when..) Sponsor:Francine Roberts

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Anula Aboobacker

Date: 7/9/2011 10:35:00 PM

savoring the wine hidden within, I'm drunk on your lines

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/26/2011 4:42:00 PM

What a neat verse. "wine of your lover's mind" I need to think on that awhile! :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/23/2011 5:22:00 PM

DRINK a WINE of DIFfer ent KIND..see hon..no wrong..must start with unstressed to be in limerick meter now watch.. to DRINK a WINE of DIF fer ent ....this word is getting you off meter because it's 3 syllables and because the second 2 are unstressed...hmmm.. to DRINK a WINE of SWEETest KIND, correct meter see? hear?, line 2 the word healthy is throwing you off meter, a WONder DRINK for HEALTH reFINED...try to fix & soup mail me HUGS

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 6/23/2011 4:06:00 PM

Oooh. nice ending. Good luck in the contest!

James Foulk

Date: 6/21/2011 1:48:00 PM

very creative, enjoyed this one. thank you for commenting on Rain Drop.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/21/2011 1:10:00 PM

Clever write, Kash

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/21/2011 1:04:00 PM

kashi... waiting for your next piece! missing your style..:) huggs!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/21/2011 12:51:00 PM

Super limerick, Kash, and the last line is amazing! Best wishes in Francine's contest with this great entry. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/21/2011 5:12:00 AM

wow ..well I sure luv that last line Kash.. potent and powerful .. always enjoy your concepts in poetry luv.. good luck in the contest.. great job on the contest theme..luv..