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Wine Lips

Slip
wine lips
like
the French
Tongue tango
angst of
sighs
Deep and
silky soft
Wet-whisper gust 
tickles ear
with warmth
Sip
goblets
cheekily
Thirst lost
in
crimson 
dusk

3/6/2023
Waltz Wave
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Checked with howmanysyllables

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Sotto Poet Date: 3/9/2023 5:55:00 AM Very well done. I notice a wine flavor. Sending best wishes for success in the contest to Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/9/2023 7:45:00 AM Thank you, dear one!

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/8/2023 11:34:00 AM I got...intoxicated by sipping the wine of your poem, dearest, Kim. Beautifully done! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/9/2023 7:45:00 AM A great compliment! Thank you dearest Demetrios!

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/8/2023 4:37:00 AM Descriptive and expressive lines. Creative way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/9/2023 7:46:00 AM Thank you, Sara! You are always a joy to read!

Valsa George Date: 3/7/2023 7:36:00 PM Excellently done. I get the taste of wine . All the Best in the contest dear Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/9/2023 7:46:00 AM Be blessed, dear poet!

Stephan McBride Date: 3/7/2023 7:27:00 AM Great poem, putting this together is excellent, love it Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/7/2023 1:51:00 PM Thank you, Stephan!

Paul Bell Date: 3/7/2023 2:14:00 AM The beauty of wine. You don't even need to drink it to saviour the delights. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/7/2023 6:29:00 AM Thank you, Paul! :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/7/2023 1:40:00 AM At my age I'd rather have wine than waltz :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/7/2023 6:29:00 AM Cheers! :)

Harry Horsman Date: 3/6/2023 9:51:00 PM Different and so clever the magic wit and poetic sense.. Harry Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/7/2023 6:28:00 AM Thank you so much, Harry!

Panagiota Romios Date: 3/6/2023 1:17:00 PM Creatively gorgeous write, Kim.))) This is an exceptional poem. Hope Emile sees the beauty in it. Also a FAV Pangie xo Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/6/2023 6:49:00 PM Thank you, Pangie!

Paige Hind Date: 3/6/2023 10:54:00 AM This reminds me of French kissing, am I right? Lovely. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/6/2023 10:59:00 AM Partly yes :) Thank you, Paige!