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Wine Lips

Slip wine lips like the French Tongue tango angst of sighs Deep and silky soft Wet-whisper gust tickles ear with warmth Sip goblets cheekily Thirst lost in crimson dusk 3/6/2023 Waltz Wave Sponsor: Emile Pinet Checked with howmanysyllables

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Sotto Poet

Date: 3/9/2023 5:55:00 AM

Very well done. I notice a wine flavor. Sending best wishes for success in the contest to Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2023 7:45:00 AM

Thank you, dear one!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/8/2023 11:34:00 AM

I got...intoxicated by sipping the wine of your poem, dearest, Kim. Beautifully done!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2023 7:45:00 AM

A great compliment! Thank you dearest Demetrios!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2023 4:37:00 AM

Descriptive and expressive lines. Creative way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2023 7:46:00 AM

Thank you, Sara! You are always a joy to read!