Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Wine Lips

Slip
wine lips
like
the French
Tongue tango
angst of
sighs
Deep and
silky soft
Wet-whisper gust 
tickles ear
with warmth
Sip
goblets
cheekily
Thirst lost
in
crimson 
dusk

3/6/2023
Waltz Wave
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Checked with howmanysyllables

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Sotto Poet March 9, 2023 at 5:55 AM Very well done. I notice a wine flavor. Sending best wishes for success in the contest to Kim. Kim Rodrigues March 9, 2023 at 7:45 AM Thank you, dear one!

Demetrios Trifiatis March 8, 2023 at 11:34 AM I got...intoxicated by sipping the wine of your poem, dearest, Kim. Beautifully done! Kim Rodrigues March 9, 2023 at 7:45 AM A great compliment! Thank you dearest Demetrios!

Sara Kendrick March 8, 2023 at 4:37 AM Descriptive and expressive lines. Creative way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Kim Rodrigues March 9, 2023 at 7:46 AM Thank you, Sara! You are always a joy to read!

Valsa George March 7, 2023 at 7:36 PM Excellently done. I get the taste of wine . All the Best in the contest dear Kim. Kim Rodrigues March 9, 2023 at 7:46 AM Be blessed, dear poet!

Stephan McBride March 7, 2023 at 7:27 AM Great poem, putting this together is excellent, love it Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2023 at 1:51 PM Thank you, Stephan!

Paul Bell March 7, 2023 at 2:14 AM The beauty of wine. You don't even need to drink it to saviour the delights. Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2023 at 6:29 AM Thank you, Paul! :)

Victor Buhagiar March 7, 2023 at 1:40 AM At my age I'd rather have wine than waltz :) Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2023 at 6:29 AM Cheers! :)

Harry Horsman March 6, 2023 at 9:51 PM Different and so clever the magic wit and poetic sense.. Harry Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2023 at 6:28 AM Thank you so much, Harry!

Panagiota Romios March 6, 2023 at 1:17 PM Creatively gorgeous write, Kim.))) This is an exceptional poem. Hope Emile sees the beauty in it. Also a FAV Pangie xo Kim Rodrigues March 6, 2023 at 6:49 PM Thank you, Pangie!

Paige Hind March 6, 2023 at 10:54 AM This reminds me of French kissing, am I right? Lovely. Kim Rodrigues March 6, 2023 at 10:59 AM Partly yes :) Thank you, Paige!