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Wine Country

Valleys wide of rust and green Rolling hills, such vintage green Woven rope of twisted vines Purple hues of grape divine Paths between the rows of braid Staked in strands so neatly laid As if a Sun God reaching down Had trailed his fingers 'cross the ground Welcome signs that offer tastes Archway drives, with landscaped gates Merlot reds, a richness deep Zinfandel, a year to keep Perfect day, a sweet escape A Champagne toast to celebrate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/25/2008 9:36:00 AM
Cheers Carrie! Sounds (and tastes) divine! Wonderful write. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/25/2008 8:11:00 AM
I live in Sonoma County wine county and nothing could describe the beauty like this poem thank you for the beautiful read
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Date: 8/25/2008 5:35:00 AM
Carrie, the flow here is set well by the couplet style, while your words offer great clarity and postion the reader right there among, not only the words, but within the scenery. Excellent! Michael
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Date: 8/25/2008 12:24:00 AM
My kind of place Carrie.Nice writing here.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 8/24/2008 2:22:00 PM
I don't drink wine anymore. I stopped almost 25 years ago. but I do remember what it taste like, I get a kick out of people whe spend a bunch of money for wine and then just let it sit and age. I enjoyed your read, very good poem.
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