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Windy Words Within

A silent storm rages on in my head
winds whisking into a symbolic swirl.
Though all alone, I lie here in my bed
spinning wound up words twisted till they twirl.

Peel off outer layers, see deep inside
emotive notions, stringy streaks in strips.
Peer into that space where one cannot hide -
stealth secrets shredded into bits of blips.

Joyfulness whistles by too quick to snatch
pondering the trip to the Pearly Gate.
Calmness lies so still, way too low to catch
crawling, creaking under this heavy weight.

These tortured torrents that may make me miss -
once settled down they turn to inner bliss.



102 words  14 lines  Sonnet  2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 2:26 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative write with a fun picture. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Gaul Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 4:47 PM
Your visit is so kind and appreciated Paula. Continued good writing to you.
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