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In the breathless Winds of March, gusts Force the daffodils To swirl, a waltz – the tango, Disco possibly, the sun A glistening ball, dazzling Even the heart who smiles Past the gales, into The dawn’s whispery light, Soft against the backdrop of starlit Nights, whimsical – alive Trusting the twisting bends Spectacular curves, risky rotations Flourishing like the flowers, Who bend back and forth, hour After hour – reflecting The warmth of a spirit who silences Every winter sadness with a Inspirational gladness, Echoed by the sunlight soothing Just beyond the racing coils, Winds meant to welcome The spring, the new, the first Revelation of fresh blooms, Daffodils, tulips, crocus.. Bruising March with their beauty, Blushing through the voice Beneath breezes sent to free them From their still winter graves, Winds meant to fill them with Gasping praise!

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Date: 3/12/2023 11:31:00 AM
Quite lovely, Gina. I love the "disco" suggestion. I sometimes think of the wild winds of March sweeping away all the detritus of winter.
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Date: 3/12/2023 12:38:00 AM
Revelation of fresh blooms, how beautiful. The entire poem is breathless as the March winds <3
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 3/12/2023 3:23:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words! God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Date: 3/7/2023 11:38:00 AM
Your "Windy Words" is a lovely write/picture. I love to see the daffodils then I know it is Springtime. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 3/7/2023 10:12:00 AM
Love the "breathless winds of March"! Where I live, on Cape Cod, it's a nasty month. We don't get many blossoms before the first of April. This poem gives me hope, though, that spring will indeed return, eventually! Good job on this.
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Date: 3/7/2023 9:56:00 AM
This is so beautiful!
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Date: 3/7/2023 6:03:00 AM
"bruising March with their beauty" WOW!! Now that's poetic imagery that makes one stop and take notice. Wonderfully done Regina...
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 3/12/2023 3:23:00 AM
Thank you so much. Love to read your beauties too. God bless you. Love, Gina
Date: 3/7/2023 4:51:00 AM
Very nice, Gina. I will be glad when all the flowers have bloomed around her. Nothing like sringtime to make one thankful.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 3/12/2023 3:24:00 AM
Love March... love seasonal beauty. Love GOD. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

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