Windy Words

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In the breathless
Winds of March, gusts
Force the daffodils
To swirl, a waltz – the tango,
Disco possibly, the sun
A glistening ball, dazzling
Even the heart who smiles
Past the gales, into 
The dawn’s whispery light,
Soft against the backdrop of starlit
Nights, whimsical – alive
Trusting the twisting bends
Spectacular curves, risky rotations
Flourishing like the flowers,
Who bend back and forth, hour
After hour – reflecting
The warmth of a spirit who silences
Every winter sadness with a 
Inspirational gladness,
Echoed by the sunlight soothing
Just beyond the racing coils,
Winds meant to welcome
The spring, the new, the first
Revelation of fresh blooms,
Daffodils, tulips, crocus..
Bruising March with their beauty,
Blushing through the voice
Beneath breezes sent to free them
From their still winter graves,
Winds meant to fill them with
Gasping praise!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/12/2023 11:31:00 AM
Quite lovely, Gina. I love the "disco" suggestion. I sometimes think of the wild winds of March sweeping away all the detritus of winter.
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Date: 3/12/2023 12:38:00 AM
Revelation of fresh blooms, how beautiful. The entire poem is breathless as the March winds <3
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 3/12/2023 3:23:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words! God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Date: 3/7/2023 11:38:00 AM
Your "Windy Words" is a lovely write/picture. I love to see the daffodils then I know it is Springtime. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 3/7/2023 10:12:00 AM
Love the "breathless winds of March"! Where I live, on Cape Cod, it's a nasty month. We don't get many blossoms before the first of April. This poem gives me hope, though, that spring will indeed return, eventually! Good job on this.
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Date: 3/7/2023 9:56:00 AM
This is so beautiful!
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Date: 3/7/2023 6:03:00 AM
"bruising March with their beauty" WOW!! Now that's poetic imagery that makes one stop and take notice. Wonderfully done Regina...
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 3/12/2023 3:23:00 AM
Thank you so much. Love to read your beauties too. God bless you. Love, Gina
Date: 3/7/2023 4:51:00 AM
Very nice, Gina. I will be glad when all the flowers have bloomed around her. Nothing like sringtime to make one thankful.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 3/12/2023 3:24:00 AM
Love March... love seasonal beauty. Love GOD. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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