Joyce Johnson Poet Rhyme

Windy Weather

I crept along, not very fast
and wished I'd heeded the newscast
on windstorm.

It was impossible to see
through all the whirling, thick, debris
from windblast.

I feared I'd bring myself disgrace
by reaching destination place
so windblown.


By: Joyce Johnson
11/15/14
For contest Fire, Earth, Wind.
preferred word: wind

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Kayod5 Kayode November 29, 2014 at 12:41 AM A good delivery Joyce,congrats on the win...huggs

Faye Gibson November 28, 2014 at 11:43 AM clever with a touch of humor...congratulations on your win.

Robert Stoner Jr November 27, 2014 at 8:39 PM congratulations on your much deserved win

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2014 at 5:43 PM good description of traveling on a windy day, Joyce! Happy thanksgiving and congrats for this win.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 26, 2014 at 7:48 PM I love how you put yourself in the storm, Joyce! You told a story in just a few lines...congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud November 26, 2014 at 7:39 AM this captured the mood of a rousing climate and how you dealt with it, joyce.. oh so fine!...thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your fine win!

Connie Marcum Wong November 26, 2014 at 1:03 AM Congratulations on your win Joyce. There were some really great entries in this contest I thought.

Maurice Yvonne November 25, 2014 at 7:38 PM Perfect story from begining to end. On that note you have the best win. Also loved the poem on the whole. Loved it, Congratulations on your win.

Sandra Haight November 25, 2014 at 6:27 PM Hi Joyce, congratulations on your win! You really presented the image, from beginning to end, that says we should always heed the weather forecast! I've been there! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison November 25, 2014 at 3:07 PM love the flow of the poem throughout the 3 stanzas - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans November 25, 2014 at 2:50 PM Congratulations on your win Joyce.

Dorian Petersen Potter November 20, 2014 at 1:36 AM Very lovely poem Joyce! Had fun reading it. Good luck in the contest! :) Love and light! xxx F.