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I crept along, not very fast and wished I'd heeded the newscast on windstorm. It was impossible to see through all the whirling, thick, debris from windblast. I feared I'd bring myself disgrace by reaching destination place so windblown. By: Joyce Johnson 11/15/14 For contest Fire, Earth, Wind. preferred word: wind

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Date: 11/29/2014 12:41:00 AM
A good delivery Joyce,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 11/28/2014 11:43:00 AM
clever with a touch of humor...congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/27/2014 8:39:00 PM
congratulations on your much deserved win
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Date: 11/27/2014 5:43:00 PM
good description of traveling on a windy day, Joyce! Happy thanksgiving and congrats for this win.
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Date: 11/26/2014 7:48:00 PM
I love how you put yourself in the storm, Joyce! You told a story in just a few lines...congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 11/26/2014 7:39:00 AM
this captured the mood of a rousing climate and how you dealt with it, joyce.. oh so fine!...thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your fine win!
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Date: 11/26/2014 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce. There were some really great entries in this contest I thought.
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Date: 11/25/2014 7:38:00 PM
Perfect story from begining to end. On that note you have the best win. Also loved the poem on the whole. Loved it, Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/25/2014 6:27:00 PM
Hi Joyce, congratulations on your win! You really presented the image, from beginning to end, that says we should always heed the weather forecast! I've been there! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:07:00 PM
love the flow of the poem throughout the 3 stanzas - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/25/2014 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Joyce.
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Date: 11/20/2014 1:36:00 AM
Very lovely poem Joyce! Had fun reading it. Good luck in the contest! :) Love and light! xxx F.
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