Seren Roberts Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Windy Shore

The sea rolls to shore
white horses prevail
the shells toss about 
crabs losing their homes 
scrambling to hide

Sea birds waiting
tasty morsels
if they are quick
bad weather luck

Winds abort
all is calm
sun comes out

children
paddling

Peace

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Arthur Vaso June 24, 2013 at 5:02 PM and even more beautiful on the second read!! Seren Roberts June 24, 2013 at 5:25 PM Thank you .......Seren

Andrea Dietrich June 18, 2013 at 12:56 AM hey, this is really nicely done. This kind of verse is not easy to do and I think you made it shine, Seren. Seren Roberts June 18, 2013 at 4:06 AM Thanks Andrea it was a bit strange to do, thought I would have a go....Seren

Arthur Vaso June 17, 2013 at 8:19 PM Beautiful Seren Roberts June 17, 2013 at 9:02 PM My ipad is jumping letters. Rol Seren Roberts June 17, 2013 at 9:01 PM Yhanks, did u likebthe for, I sed

Russell Sivey June 17, 2013 at 5:44 AM This is a glorious write my friend! I am truly enlightened by this tremendous poem Seren! You have captured exactly what a windy shore would be like! I really enjoyed reading this amazing piece this morning! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!