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Windy Shore

The sea rolls to shore white horses prevail the shells toss about crabs losing their homes scrambling to hide Sea birds waiting tasty morsels if they are quick bad weather luck Winds abort all is calm sun comes out children paddling Peace

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/24/2013 5:02:00 PM

and even more beautiful on the second read!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/24/2013 5:25:00 PM

Thank you .......Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2013 12:56:00 AM

hey, this is really nicely done. This kind of verse is not easy to do and I think you made it shine, Seren.

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/18/2013 4:06:00 AM

Thanks Andrea it was a bit strange to do, thought I would have a go....Seren

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/17/2013 8:19:00 PM

Beautiful

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/17/2013 9:02:00 PM

My ipad is jumping letters. Rol

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/17/2013 9:01:00 PM

Yhanks, did u likebthe for, I sed

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/17/2013 5:44:00 AM

This is a glorious write my friend! I am truly enlightened by this tremendous poem Seren! You have captured exactly what a windy shore would be like! I really enjoyed reading this amazing piece this morning! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!