Windy Day

The wind blows wild and free.

The trees tremble in fear.

Some branches escape and flee

Saying " We're out of here"

As down the street they disappear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 6:11 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Francine. I enjoyed reading it today. May you have a wonderful weekend and always find inspiration to continue your writing. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 8:07 PM
It would take some strong winds to blow branches off a tree and carry them down the street. You have a decent entry here.
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:57 PM
I really like this one, Francine. Short and wonderful. HIgh rating!
Devonshire Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 2:43 PM
You added a bit of humor to the excellent imagery employed in this poem, Francine. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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