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Windward Blown

My heart is your kite Tug the string gently, but hold it tight Windward blown, now rising ... taking flight Give your kite plenty of slack Watch it soar into the atmosphere But if you carelessly let it go, it's never coming back here Nor should it, my darling dear ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 4/17/2017 8:41:00 AM

Very creative concrete kite poem about a love relationship and what could happen~Enjoyed!~P &L~Che :)

Afzal Nusker

Date: 4/16/2017 11:34:00 PM

A very creative poem. I love the subject and the shape. 7+

Chris Green

Date: 4/12/2017 6:15:00 AM

Hold on tight because the winds of change are fierce around these parts and I might just end of in another's smooth tight grip. Really cool pattern and poem my friend.