Notes About The Poem

Inspired by Yann Rolland’s “symphony in my car.” I landed on Charles Ives Symphony 2. I don’t often take the time to listen to classical music, but let this one sweep me away.

Windswept

Windswept

Over sheet music, harmonious movement of sand.
Droplets of rain dance - time swooning on sea and on land.

Cupid’s arrows climb, descend strings of the violin.
Heartthrobs, side by side, in best dress, on seasonal spin.

Fingers up and down long necks, in obeisance of song,
as bow ties glide along knightly, mounting music, strong.

Ultra concentration as the conductor gyrates,
creates, weights, debates, elongates, plaits and translates.

Unity in mass, jealousy laid aside, except
for the audience who longs to climb inside, windswept.

Ebb and flow of tears, patiently are kept and foreswear
allegiance to current marriage with hasty prayer.

Silver fox-french horns, don’t withhold their breaths, breasts pounding.
With lilt, rapturous, they’d give up their lives, resounding.

White pages, pristine ties, good looking manners of tides.
Hourglass climax expires. Silence shatters. Faith abides.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Harp Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 11:25 PM
Wow, Kim, this is a well composed poem with all the “mounting music strong.”
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 11:42 AM
Thank you, MH!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Windswept" is a lovely write. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a wonderful day with your win............................
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 10:11 AM
Thank you so much, my friend! Keep writing! Hugs ~ Kim
Gifford Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 12:45 AM
Beautifully written and a great read, Kim. Congratulations on your POTD win. Have a wonderful day.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 5:48 AM
Thank you, Zyrool!
Mcintosh Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 10:59 PM
Amazing writing. Just beautiful. God bless you and Congratulations on POTD. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 5:48 AM
God bless you too, sweet lady! Thank you!
Buehler Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 9:33 PM
Your poem is a treasure and a delight, dear Kim. It's a fave for me. Congratulations on POTD. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 5:49 AM
Thank you so much! That means a lot to me, Evelyn!
Nicole Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 7:56 PM
Dear Kim, classical music is like poetry is motion. Simple, yet elegant and graceful, all at the same time. I'm in awe right now, as I'm reading your words. ' harmonious movement of sand, time swooning on sea and on land. ' This is so beautiful. The melody sweeps across the page. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 5:49 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment, dear Brandy! Hugs ~ Kim
Gayagay Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 6:39 PM
Reading your poem, I feel like I am engulfed by beautiful, powerful music from different instruments carefully and intelligently orchestrated to create harmony. Congrats on POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 5:50 AM
Ryan, I appreciate your comment so much! Thank you!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:38 PM
Dear Kim, Congratulations on POTD. Enjoyed the beautiful symphony with your words, especially this line spoke to me: "creates, weights, debates, elongates, plaits and translates."
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 5:23 PM
I am so happy you liked that line! Thanks, Mala!
Wolf Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 10:28 AM
Congrats on POTD, Kim. You have now replaced 'The Music Man!' Smiles, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 5:25 PM
Oh my, now I search for 76 trombones :)
Anaya Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 12:35 PM
LOL. Gw. I love The Music Man! I watch it every year on my travels in hotel!! Congratulations Kimmy! Beautiful rhymage .
Gorelick Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 9:39 AM
Your stunning words in this tribute to the world of symphonic drama, provide an inspiring introspection. Mesmerizing. Congratulations on POTD! My Best, Robert
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 5:26 PM
Appreciate so much! Thank you, Robert!
Seeker Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 7:26 AM
Musical symphony, that’s how it sounds, simply beautiful. Warmest congratulations on POTD, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 5:26 PM
I needed some warmth, really…so cold here today! Thank you, my friend!
May Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 6:56 AM
Well composed Kim, Congrats on POTD
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 5:28 PM
Thank you, Joe!
M  Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 6:54 AM
So lovely Kim….deserving of POTD…..Congratulations! Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 5:32 PM
Thank you, Deb!
Tor Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 5:31 AM
Kim a big congratulations on your Musical Triumph Such a wonderful write for the ear and eyes. Congratulations on this high honor of POTD you have received...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 5:32 PM
Thanks, Mike!
Rodgers Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:16 AM
Dear Kim, Absolutely breathtaking! The musical imagery, the rhythmic flow, and the deeply felt emotional landscape you've created are stunning. Congratulations on POTD for you totally deserve it! Your words dance like the music you've described, weaving magic across the page. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:40 AM
I feel blessed! Thank you, Daniel! :)
Elliott Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 3:35 AM
So beauteous,Kim. Bravissimo! Congratulations On POTD. Enjoy your special poetry day!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:41 AM
Thank you, Gina! :)
Kitchin Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 3:31 AM
Kim, beautifully penned, congratulations on POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:41 AM
Thank you, Tania! :)
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 2:20 AM
- A well-deserved p.o.t.d., Kim ... congratulations ... enjoy your day :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:42 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)
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November 22, 2024 at 2:16 AM
A beautiful musical poem Kim, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Bel
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:42 AM
Thank you, Beryl! :)
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November 22, 2024 at 2:10 AM
A lovely poem worthy of POTD. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:43 AM
Thank you, Victor! :)
Jones Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 12:49 AM
Back to say congratulations on your well written potd!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:43 AM
Thank you, Karen! :)
Feeley Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 12:45 AM
Congrats on POTD. I wonder if you are a musician as well as a poet. You have certainly captured a range of emotions and blended points of view. Thanks.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:44 AM
I’m not a musician but thank you so much! xx
Cunningham Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 12:32 AM
Congratulations to you Kim on today's POTD honour. Enjoy your day. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:45 AM
Thank you, Tom! :)
Wolf Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 8:40 PM
So many moods and sudden shifts thereof in a musical performance. Your keen eye, ear and heart have captured them well, Kim, methinks. Bravo, Maestra!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:45 AM
Thank you, dear friend! :)
Hind Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 5:52 PM
This really does remind me of the sea- what a great metaphor, Kim! It's lovely- listening now. True is you! "Over sheet music, harmonious movement of sand. Droplets of rain dance - time swooning on sea and on land." That first line takes my breath away! :) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 5:57 PM
I am so glad that you enjoyed the first line! Thank you, my friend!
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