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Windstorm

snatching of branches side to side bending a-swoosh ~ passerines hold fast 5/7/2020 Tania Kitchin’s A Haiku with Movement

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Date: 5/10/2020 2:31:00 AM

Awesome Haiku, Kim, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2020 7:29:00 AM

Thank you, Eve! xx

Date: 5/9/2020 9:51:00 PM

awesome word choices, Kim. Congrats in the contest!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2020 10:22:00 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Date: 5/9/2020 1:49:00 PM

"snatching" and "side to side" - I really feel the movement - almost like a swing. Congratulations on your win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2020 1:55:00 PM

Thank you, Sam, for your detailed comment!

Date: 5/9/2020 10:33:00 AM

Kim, congrats to you also for a lovely haiku being placed in the list. Best. Mohan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2020 11:03:00 AM

Thank you, Mohan!

Date: 5/9/2020 6:03:00 AM

Kim, congratulations on your winning placement, I loved the last line and had to look up passerines, lovely imagery!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2020 9:29:00 AM

Thank you so much :)

Date: 5/7/2020 2:28:00 PM

Love the image Kim, plenty of movement in it. Good luck Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 2:34:00 PM

Thank you, Tom!

Date: 5/7/2020 9:10:00 AM

Whoa! You've nailed this one nicely... 'Hope is a passerine with its feathers blown up in a windstorm!' ~ Emily Wolfinson

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 9:28:00 AM

Perhaps a combo name Wolf and Emily!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 9:19:00 AM

Ooh...thanks for that share. Must look her up!

Date: 5/7/2020 9:00:00 AM

Oh! Bird nerd indulgement! Love it. xomo!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 9:19:00 AM

Right?! I want to learn every nuance. Cheers to you!