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Windsongs

In silhouette of dreams hovering That meanders vivid upon the night; The hum of music from so long ago Romances the air … a twirl, a lyric-- While tunes of mist stir of rhapsody Along the harbor to fling and gently play, A recital of crystal beats, as lips intone love’s quiver From this earnest heart deepened by time, When ambrosial songs of wind now drape Breaths’ charmed trails gushing on— And words become an impassioned call Deepening my hymnal interludes; As the mellow jangle…the chime of bells Slithers like a windblown mantra--- Luring my beloved at sea to come home. 8/27/2018 For Edward Ibeh’s Wind Chimes Contest

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Date: 9/15/2018 8:05:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Nette, congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/1/2018 2:30:00 PM
Such gorgeous imagery. Many congrats on your win Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/30/2018 9:54:00 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats Nette..
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Date: 8/30/2018 8:56:00 AM
Beautiful imagery. Such sweet music.
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Date: 8/29/2018 9:56:00 PM
Words fail me. Exquisite. I leave it at that. ~ Tinkle on and on, Gershon
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Date: 8/29/2018 4:54:00 PM
WoW! Ink weave those lush words, Nette! Great poetic imagery doth your pristine pen produce. Meesa love this poem, Meesa love it a lot. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 8/29/2018 2:22:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, Nette!:-) Congratulations on your win with this soothing, exquisite write!
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Date: 8/28/2018 3:12:00 PM
Fabulous write Nette, a sure winner...
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Date: 8/28/2018 11:29:00 AM
Just lovely - your poem itself sounds like a windchime song.
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Date: 8/28/2018 8:24:00 AM
An enchanting wind song Nette...Gl in the contest
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Date: 8/27/2018 11:01:00 PM
The haunting beauty of your exquisite poem will remain in my consciousness and stir my soul, Nette.. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/27/2018 3:12:00 PM
A yearning installation....that's how it left me feeling Nette! The last stanza aloud did it for me. Love sent!
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Date: 8/27/2018 3:06:00 PM
Such a beautiful and soothing piece of writing Nette. Really nice.
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Date: 8/27/2018 1:54:00 PM
The harmonious interplay of tingling chimes adorns this gem of a poem. It's bound to be at or near the top of the contest. Bravo! :) gw
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Date: 8/27/2018 1:26:00 PM
Beautiful, passionate poem Nette! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 8/27/2018 12:57:00 PM
A charming wind-song..elegantly depicted..enjoyed reading the artistic rendering..well crafted as always..best for a win, nette.
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Date: 8/27/2018 12:15:00 PM
JUst wonderful, good luck in the contest, this is a winner for sure.
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