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Winds Prank

Gray fog ease under darken night; Consumed by tears and frozen fright. Trees lie upon forest dense floor, As bitter chill wind flows and snore. In darkness inward whirls around. Wolfs, howl! Owl hoots! A riled screams sound. I am chill to the bone; I shout. Flashlight flickered, flared and went out. The doorknob turns. Shush, not a word; It shuts close, snap of the lock heard. Frigid chill stream through the dim air; Crackling fire burns, do not known where. Ashes and smoke fly all around; Fire licking up like tongues abound. Hush, hush, she hangs from the rafter. I run, from the wind's shrill laughter. 10/7/2021 Something Spooky 8 To 16 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 10/25/2021 12:01:00 PM
Well done Eve. Flows just like that phantom breeze! I would run too! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:35:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your creepy and creative poem!
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Date: 10/24/2021 12:53:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/24/2021 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Winds Prank" is a spooky story/write. Love your line "I run, from the wind's shrill laughter." I would run tooooooooo. Have a blessed autumn day.................
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Date: 10/11/2021 9:15:00 AM
Quite a thriller, I enjoyed reading how you summoned this poem to scare us and give us nightmares, that is why it is excellent! Penned with craftsmanship quality. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/8/2021 1:47:00 AM
You capture the dark forces of the wind perfectly. Hugs.
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Date: 10/7/2021 12:58:00 PM
That certainly is spooky, Eve. I think I would run, too.
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/7/2021 1:33:00 PM
Thank you, Milton. Didn't know what to write.
Date: 10/7/2021 12:45:00 PM
Spooky indeed. Good luck in the contest!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/7/2021 1:34:00 PM
Thank you , Karen.
Date: 10/7/2021 11:50:00 AM
very creepy lines for Halloween:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/7/2021 1:35:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Hope you and your mom are better. Hugs

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