Winds Prank

Gray fog ease under darken night;
Consumed by tears and frozen fright.

Trees lie upon forest dense floor,
As bitter chill wind flows and snore.

In darkness inward whirls around.
Wolfs, howl! Owl hoots! A riled screams sound.

I am chill to the bone; I shout.
Flashlight flickered, flared and went out.

The doorknob turns. Shush, not a word;
It shuts close, snap of the lock heard.

Frigid chill stream through the dim air;
Crackling fire burns, do not known where.

Ashes and smoke fly all around;
Fire licking up like tongues abound.

Hush, hush, she hangs from the rafter.
I run, from the wind's shrill laughter.


10/7/2021


Something Spooky 8 To 16 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
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Kauffman Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 12:01 PM
Well done Eve. Flows just like that phantom breeze! I would run too! Congratulations on your win!
Kitchin Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 2:35 PM
Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your creepy and creative poem!
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 12:53 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Winds Prank" is a spooky story/write. Love your line "I run, from the wind's shrill laughter." I would run tooooooooo. Have a blessed autumn day.................
Proxenos Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Quite a thriller, I enjoyed reading how you summoned this poem to scare us and give us nightmares, that is why it is excellent! Penned with craftsmanship quality. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 1:47 AM
You capture the dark forces of the wind perfectly. Hugs.
Hankins Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 12:58 PM
That certainly is spooky, Eve. I think I would run, too.
Roper Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 1:33 PM
Thank you, Milton. Didn't know what to write.
Jones Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 12:45 PM
Spooky indeed. Good luck in the contest!
Roper Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 1:34 PM
Thank you , Karen.
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 11:50 AM
very creepy lines for Halloween:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Thank you, Jan. Hope you and your mom are better. Hugs
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