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Winds of Time

 
~~ I struggle always with my memories, The long ago past is forever lurking; In a moment I am whispered back, And the pages of my life are fluttering. Fluttering in the misty winds of time, To where the joyful and painful burn; O but this is the key to who I am, And each memory has its own turn. Turn back the pages of my journey, I am a little girl playing and dreaming; O but to stay frozen in this memory, And to not ever know the pain of weeping. Weeping has always been my companion, I so often stand in a place of sorrows; Past the ornate gate and winding road, And the past shall haunt all my tomorrows. ______________________ August 16, 2014 Poetry/Quatrain/Winds of Time Copyright Protected, ID 08-591-463-16 All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, Any Poem #8, sponsor, Skat, Judged 08/2014 Third Place _________________________ Submitted to the Standard contest, Where Frozen Embers Burn, sponsor Gail Doyle, 2014 8th place
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Carter Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 7:19 AM
Just read your winds of time congrats I love it!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 2:50 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win BW,, lovely write my dear!
A   Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 1:52 AM
Broken, Congrats on your Any Old Poem #8 win. Always ~LINDA~
Smith Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 6:34 PM
I really like this Constance. I love how you use the last word of the stanza as the first word of the next. I think it gives that word more meaning and carries your thought with it...congratulations Tim
Harding Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 1:26 PM
So sad and beautiful... congrats on your win
A  Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 1:14 AM
Broken, Congratulations, on your awesome win. SKAT
Mcdaid Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 4:25 AM
wow truly excellent piece grasping beautifully penned piece
La France Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 4:53 PM
Thank you so much Liam ~~
Mehta Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 5:47 AM
Moving emotions and sentiments nicely penned, Constance
La France Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 8:58 AM
Thanks so much Dr. Ram for your forever support ~~
Devonshire Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 4:05 PM
There is such a deep sadness in your poem. It's sad to think of you "fluttering in the misty winds of time." I have missed you and hope you are doing well. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 9:01 AM
Thanks Carolyn, yes my poetry does have a sadness to it and I am forever haunted by the past, it is really so good to hear from you, I am doing well thanks and I hope you are also ~~
Gibson Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 3:38 PM
Congrats...this winning placement does not surprise me.
La France Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 9:01 AM
O thanks Faye, your support means a lot to me ~~
Callus Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 9:35 AM
Excellent take on this topic; beautiful phrases all through; to me it is a sure winner. gl just the same. // paul
La France Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 2:32 PM
Thank you so much Paul for your support of my poetry ~~
Lindley Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 3:02 PM
This is a jewel . A superb write that shows profound sadness. BBBravoooooo!!!!
La France Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 3:51 PM
Thanks so much Robert, I am so happy you came to my poems and read this write, your support is appreciated ~~
A. Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 1:31 AM
Wonderful write Broken wings, sad although ! Good luck to u!
La France Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 7:33 PM
Thank you so much Upma, I do sometimes write such sad words~~
Horne Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 5:52 PM
such a sad but beautiful write here, my friend. hope you and the kitties are having a great weekend x
La France Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 7:35 PM
TU Jack, you know me always with the sad, me and the kitties are hanging in, each day is a gift ~~
Gibson Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 5:17 PM
Beautiful, Broken Wings. "I so often stand in place of sorrows." So poignant.
La France Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 5:32 PM
Thanks Faye for your wonderful comment ~~
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