Winds of the Night

Oh winds upon the starry night Hum sweet a song for me A delicate song in the mistless light On the emerald sparkling sea. Pluck now that ripe old sadness That bitter tune of despair Drift me upon the fields of gladness By the budding tree most fair. Which by the bubbling crystal fountain Would await to hold your tender hands That ascends to the lulling mountain And on the gentle breast of verdant lands. Where neither haunt nor woe does creep From your comely songs in moonlight And before my lover is fast asleep Please blow her a kiss goodnight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Anglesey Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 2:00 PM
A very beautiful place to feel and visit with every phrase written.
Jones Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 8:53 PM
Would await to hold your tender hands...ahhh there is something so innocent yet feels so intimate holding hands...the poem flows like a nighttime breeze thru the mountain pines....lovely M......:-)
Chircop Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 2:42 AM
I love the song of these winds on a starry night..Mesmerizing!!! Tnks for stopping by one of my older scribbles ..and keep posting these wonderful poems
Richards Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 7:09 PM
Your poems are so wonderful. The wind could not sound any more lovely than your poem !! :)
Mohammed Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 6:23 AM
Thank you guys for all your wonderful reviews on this piece. Its been a great pleasure reading all your touching reviews and encouragement.
Vaso Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 7:45 PM
Amazing poem!!
Mohammed Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 5:53 AM
Thank you Arthur for that lovely review. Much appreciated.
Onclaud Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 1:23 PM
just so mellow, it makes me flutter with dleight, mus... i like how you swept me off my feet with this breathtaking whiff of a piece...:) huggs
Mohammed Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 5:50 AM
Thank you Nette, I'm delighted to hear from you. Glad you enjoyed...hugs.
Montgomery Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 10:18 AM
Enjoying your poetry, Mustapha! Nice conducting of the wind! Its a beautiful song! Molly
Mohammed Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 5:48 AM
Thank you Molly for your lovely review. Its nice to hear from you always.
Hendricks Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 11:17 AM
I'm hooked to your eloquence. Lovely write, Mustapha. Licia :-)
Mohammed Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 5:47 AM
Thank you Delysia for your wonderful review. So glad to hear from you my friend.
Beaufort Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 7:51 AM
This poem tells me that you have a lot of tenderness, sir! I have to love the way you can use part of nature the way you have. Really super!
Mohammed Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 5:45 AM
Thank you Duke for your kind review. Many say that I have the heart of a child so thus that tender aspect comes out in my poetry.
Haick Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 10:24 PM
Aww! Simply sweet and beautiful, Mustapha/ Definitelym this goes to my favs! Love it! Have a great weekend and always, thanks for sharing all you gems! Always, Annalise
Mohammed Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 2:42 AM
Thank you for faving this Annalise and your reviews are most encouraging.
Liwayway Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 10:53 AM
WOW! very lovely write friend Mustapha, Very creative :) thanks for sharing. Good day. Maria
Mohammed Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 6:06 PM
Thank you for your lovely review friend. You have a wonderful day also.
Hamilton Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 6:15 PM
dear M.M this is hauntingly lovely the flow and imagery excellent Love Shadow xox smile
Mohammed Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 6:01 PM
Dearest friend, you always make my day when I hear from you. Sending warm love and greetings your way dearest friend.
That Archaic Poet Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 9:23 AM
Very pretty piece; you have numerous beautiful verses throughout. I especially enjoyed "Pluck now that ripe old sadness". Great poem; kudos! :)
Mohammed Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 5:59 PM
Hi Archaic, its a pleasure to hear from you. Your honest and kind reviews is most appreciated always. : )
Onclaud Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 8:54 AM
you sing of love's twilight that moves the spirit, mus... just divine!..:)
Mohammed Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 5:55 PM
Thank you Nette for your kind encouraging words dear poet. : )
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Good Morning Mustapha. What is the meaning of your name? Drop me a soup mail some time, I would like to learn more about you.
Mohammed Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 5:53 PM
Mustapha means ''The Chosen One''. Mohammed means ''Most Praiseworthy''. Thank you Richard always.
Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 6:24 AM
Great poetic quality..It has great rhythm, rhyme, and flow..I enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
Mohammed Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 5:48 PM
Thank you Sara, its always a delight to hear from you. : )
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 12:09 AM
ahhh, looks like one that could be a kiss from heaven! WEll Done!
Mohammed Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:49 PM
Thank you Andrea for your kiss from heaven...lol. Glad you enjoyed.
Jones Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 3:54 PM
Mustapha.. your words bring calmness to the soul....I especially love the 2nd stanza....
Mohammed Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:46 PM
Thank you Donna for your kind review. Your words brings my soul joy just knowing that.
Richards Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 2:55 PM
So romantic, as lovely as moonlight! This is a beauty !! Nice !!
Mohammed Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:30 PM
Thank you Carrie for your lovely review. Its always a pleasure to hear from you.
Deschler Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 1:56 PM
I loved this poem! It is so beautiful and sweet. I like how you carried the theme of wind throughout this piece. Very nicely done!
Mohammed Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:28 PM
Thank you Kelly. I thought it would be pretty cool to switch from one imagery to another as if carried along by the wind. So thus the maintained theme throughout.
A   Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 12:23 PM
Hello M & M.... lovely ... the way you paint the wind and cradle her with a sweet kiss goodnight... always~ Linda
Mohammed Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:26 PM
Thank you for your kind review Linda. Its always nice to hear from you.
Roberts Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Lovely poem Mustapha, enjoyed the read...Seren
Mohammed Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:20 PM
Thanks for reading Seren. Its always nice to hear from you.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 8:04 AM
This has a whimsical and airy feel. I really enjoyed both your poems this morning.
Mohammed Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:15 PM
Thank you Richard for perusing both my poems. I'm glad you did indeed.
Chircop Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 5:47 AM
Very beautiful poem..Im glad i got to read it: : )Charma
Mohammed Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:13 PM
Thank you Charmaine for your lovely review and I'm glad you did also....:)
12
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace