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Winds of Change

The wind howls. as the grey wolf licks his wounds pareparing himself for the next battle he survery the area as the ground shivers beneath a winter's chill Instinct didn't prepare him for the attack as the leader snarled and snapped the others stood with clenched teeth and tearing jaws Spawned by the pack he recently joined he wanders alone in the threatening wood though two greys approach on the ridge, growling their disapproval he follows in the distance Soon his cuts will heal the earth will revel in its thaw and once again, he'll join the pack as an equal But for now, his out-cast and kindred spirit is broken by the Winds of Change As he follows in the distant night his solemn cry is lost... in the approaching storm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/6/2009 12:08:00 PM
Jack, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/26/2009 6:21:00 PM
Jack..I loved your poem and congrats on making the win list, The title caught my eye too, I wrote a poem in April called THE WINDS OF CHANGE! It doesn't fit here in the comment box...to read it look up Lydia Brescia on this site!Namaste, Lydia
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Date: 9/26/2009 9:53:00 AM
Jack, I just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2009 6:08:00 AM
They say in the wolves that the outcast most times ends up being the leader. Love your writing. Sara
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Date: 7/11/2009 8:34:00 AM
Congrats on your featured write. A wonderful piece. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/11/2009 5:22:00 AM
Hey, I love your theme, thrust & tone.What a wonderful piece! You are such a great poet. Please keep writing & congratulations on your excellent piece being featured dis week. Great you Jack!
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:38:00 PM
Jack, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/6/2009 4:38:00 PM
Congrats on "Winds of Change" being featured, Jack. Vince
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Date: 7/6/2009 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem well done! Laura :)
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Date: 7/6/2009 10:39:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 7/6/2009 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem>>James
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Date: 7/6/2009 6:23:00 AM
Thought provoking poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/6/2009 5:46:00 AM
Jack, congratulations on your featured poem this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2009 11:37:00 PM
Nice job my friend and congratulations on your featured poem this week. God bless and more success in the future. Ernilando
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Date: 4/26/2009 11:51:00 PM
How sad to feel like an outcast. Life can certainly snarl and snap at those who have been abandoned. I enjoyed the wolf's story; nice use of personification.
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