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Winds of Change

I was a rose cored inside your bosom a verity of truth so seldom seen place your hand on the spot where I blossomed you'll feel the shiver of my petaleen you were the gardener with the warmest touch caressing my petals, you made me cry each gentle kiss a floral scented sigh thanks to my grower I grew up so much Winds of change have blown and now you are gone I'm just a dead flower, sitting on your lawn Feeling the nip of a wintertime frost, I realize just how much I have lost. November 27, 2020

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Date: 12/22/2020 9:24:00 AM
Finally someone who actually knows how to pen a sonnet. For such a difficult format, you have written remarkably well.
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Date: 12/22/2020 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Rob, I always loved the form.
Date: 12/3/2020 2:52:00 AM
Melancholic! Things get changed. Amd we can't do anything about it. Loved the Imagery. You have penned it quite beautifully
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Date: 12/2/2020 4:02:00 PM
Amazing ink. Love it. well done.
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Date: 11/30/2020 1:34:00 PM
Such a sad but beautiful image, Pixie!!
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Date: 11/28/2020 10:07:00 AM
A very impressive write that bring such deep feelings! Lovely rhyme too! All the best in the contest!
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Date: 11/28/2020 6:17:00 AM
Amazing sonnet with a soft touch, Pixie:)
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Date: 11/28/2020 4:58:00 AM
This is an amazing write my friend. Much enjoyed the tender tone and flow, Vienna.
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Date: 11/28/2020 4:50:00 AM
A beautiful opening line, So delicate is this poem, and a sad end.... shows the wind of change and how it can effect someone....
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Date: 11/28/2020 4:02:00 AM
Oh, wow.. this is beautiful - a gentle touch of hope - brilliant. A fave for sure. Love it :) God bless you
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Date: 11/28/2020 12:35:00 AM
Amazing composition!
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Date: 11/27/2020 6:07:00 PM
Shiver if my petaleen...so pretty!
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