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Winds of Change

Like a reclusive boat, I remained there, discerning the prevailing winds of change, which many a time, made me embrace fear, by surpassing the stipulated range. When winds of change blurred the light house's light, I blanked out and forgot my wonted route. Struggled, wiggled and jiggled without sight amid the sea, and there a hope sprouted. Even when vigorously slapped on face, and ruthlessly elevated mild tides, it's a toilsome task to shudder ,sea base and that's why I endorse her as a guide. She persuaded that it's not writ large force that help us win; it's just our inner source Nov-17-2020

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Date: 2/21/2021 6:38:00 AM
Yes. ;0)
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Date: 12/22/2020 11:56:00 AM
Finding inner strength in order to change what pains us. Excellent write. Hugs
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Date: 12/21/2020 5:50:00 AM
Hi Supraja, What a well-written Sonnet. With an emphasis on your last two lines. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/17/2020 10:13:00 AM
A well penned sonnet Supraja.. Loved it.. ~ Ani
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Date: 12/7/2020 2:13:00 PM
very nice, Supraja. Looks like you have not posted so much lately, so I am happy to see this latest work of yours.
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Date: 11/25/2020 10:53:00 AM
You have made good use of metaphor, Supraja. Finding the power of our hidden strength enables us to conquer fear and doubts. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 11/17/2020 5:57:00 AM
Welcome back Supraja. Your sonnet is lovely and full of meaning. Best for a win. ~~
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Date: 11/17/2020 5:16:00 AM
Enjoyed this ride with you through winds of change, Supraja. All the best.
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Date: 11/17/2020 3:34:00 AM
Very good sonnet Supraja...
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 11/17/2020 4:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, SO

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