Winds

THE UNDETERMINED WIND MOVES; AND TRAVELING ABOUT, IT PERMEATES DARKNESS, THE HURRICANE SHOUTS AND IT’S NOT TAMED BY MEN YET THE REIGNS REST IN GOD’S BREATHING OUT

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/27/2016 5:48:00 PM

Hi Bonnie, this is a great Rubai...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/4/2016 12:51:00 AM

I understand, Rubai looks easy but it is difficult, because you have to tell the entire story in four little statements.....I have a few myself....love to read more from you.... pashang

Bonnie Jennings
Date: 9/28/2016 11:48:00 AM

My auto correct (LOL) spelled your name wrong. I wrote Pashang, but just like now, autocorrect wants to change it to "passing." Love/hate relationship with autocorrect.

Bonnie Jennings
Date: 9/28/2016 11:46:00 AM

Thank you Passing. I would like to learn more about Rubai, and Urdue... I love the philosophical wisdom that the poetry gives mankind. Thank you so much. Bonnie